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FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Art Gallery => Topic started by: Jayheart on January 12, 2011, 04:40:22 pm

Title: Jayheart12's Art (Image Heavy)
Post by: Jayheart on January 12, 2011, 04:40:22 pm

I have only been drawing really traditonal style and digital style for about a year. So please, don't feel bad if you give me a constructive-criticism comment! :D (Probably spelt that wrong. xD)

Mostly these are of my fursona, Neon Fusion.

This was from the start of 2010:

(http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/goodtimesbyisabella.jpg)

This is my most recent piece:

(http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/NeonFusion1.png)

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Title: Re: Jayheart12's Art (Image Heavy)
Post by: Zeberius on January 12, 2011, 04:43:17 pm

Great improvement!
I suggest making the forehead lower though.
And try making something with no shades, as an experiment.
What program do you use? (Gimp hmm?)

Title: Re: Jayheart12's Art (Image Heavy)
Post by: Jayheart on January 12, 2011, 04:47:01 pm

I used to use Gimp. But now I use Photoshop Elements, and Paint Tool SAI.

Thank you for the advice. :D I'll try that next time. I usually don't draw dogs/wolves. I'm more of a cat person when it comes to drawing.

Title: Re: Jayheart12's Art (Image Heavy)
Post by: Jayheart on January 12, 2011, 04:48:04 pm

These were in between:
(http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/riverrockXrosethorn_edited-1.png)
(http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/AVATARSpeedpaintPicture1_edited-1.png)
(http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/Jayheart_NewDesign_Speedpaint_1_10Subscribers.jpg)
(http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/WhiteLion1_Mweor_Commission_edited-1.png)
(http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/Dog-Jack-Sketch_Done_bak.jpg)
(http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/Inthemoonseyes_edited-2.png) (http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/JayfeatherxCinderheart_edited-1.png)
(http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/NeonFusion.png) Here are some animations: (http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/Fusion1.gif) (http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/ruiryu.gif) (http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/tyik.gif) (http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab27/Jayheart12/YoutubeAnimation1_WMM.gif)

Title: Re: Jayheart12's Art (Image Heavy)
Post by: Zeberius on January 12, 2011, 04:53:11 pm

Oh, and your shading is too dark and soft.

Title: Re: Jayheart12's Art (Image Heavy)
Post by: Jayheart on January 12, 2011, 04:56:09 pm

That's what I was thinking. No one ever gives me advice, really, so I never improve unless I really realize it. I usually draw in cartoon styles, not ever realistic. Thanks. ^^

Title: Re: Jayheart12's Art (Image Heavy)
Post by: Zeberius on January 12, 2011, 05:00:34 pm

Well you could study some anatomy tutorials on dA.

Title: Re: Jayheart12's Art (Image Heavy)
Post by: Jayheart on January 12, 2011, 05:05:35 pm

Alright. :D Whenever I go on dA I'll search that up.

Title: Re: Jayheart12's Art (Image Heavy)
Post by: littlefoxchild on January 12, 2011, 09:44:23 pm

mad Skill!

Title: Re: Jayheart12's Art (Image Heavy)
Post by: Sylph on January 12, 2011, 10:28:35 pm

These are really good!
and great improvement since your first piece! ;3

Title: Re: Jayheart12's Art (Image Heavy)
Post by: Sarine on January 13, 2011, 02:48:00 pm

Agreed, big improvement and nice hand. Keep it up~ :3