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FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Addons & Mods => Presets & Markings => Topic started by: freedom on January 09, 2011, 05:12:59 am

Title: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 09, 2011, 05:12:59 am
I dont know how to show a picture here so here's the link; http://diamehikoru.deviantart.com/art/first-preset-192722084 tell me what you think...
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Runningwolfpro on January 09, 2011, 06:20:47 am
I like him! He seems a bit messy, though :P
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 09, 2011, 06:27:01 am
im never good enough....doesnt matter where i am....deleting this now it doesnt matter that i worked on it all night....
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Runningwolfpro on January 09, 2011, 06:32:07 am
Ah okay. I would've loved to RP with him, too. Sucks for my char! :/
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: M-Wolf on January 09, 2011, 06:33:08 am
Wow, I thought it was great.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 09, 2011, 07:31:43 am
It's "a bit messy" because you cant see the details or the blending or the...effort i put into it. ):
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Kiyi on January 09, 2011, 07:33:58 am
Try saving a screenshot as PNG instead of JPEG, then it won't be all fuzzy/messy.
I personally like it, it kind of looks like an ocean, with all the ice bergs and currents. :3
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 09, 2011, 08:36:58 am
It's my first one and it took me 6 hours. Thank you though...I notice it does seem a bit crowded though, that's because its for a bigger wolf~
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Xava on January 09, 2011, 08:40:40 am
Well, regardless of what you say, I love how it looks. Messy or not, it's pretty gosh darn amazing.
Much much better than anything I could ever do. ^_^
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Avani on January 09, 2011, 11:30:28 am
Awesome!
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Runningwolfpro on January 09, 2011, 08:13:10 pm
I didn't say it was messy in a mean way, I can tell you spent forever on it! O_o It looks like, amazing!
Stop doubting yourself...
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Ritsuka on January 09, 2011, 08:55:14 pm
gah! that looks awesome o_o *jealous grabby hands*
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: SrsBusiness on January 09, 2011, 10:43:50 pm
It looks so cool! Good job!
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 09, 2011, 11:23:39 pm
I doubted myself because your lovely comment was first.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Miette on January 09, 2011, 11:33:27 pm
I think the only reason it might have been called "messy" was maybe because there's just so much to look at! Maybe if you simplified it a bit, or made some of the markings larger, while others were small details that would accentuate (/bring out) the main markings, it would look even better! :D
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 10, 2011, 01:26:51 am
whatever im getting rid of it anyway
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: choosen on January 10, 2011, 02:15:40 am
wow i really like him
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: SacuraShadow on January 10, 2011, 03:48:19 am
amazing
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: dharma on January 10, 2011, 05:14:12 am
It's a shame you deleted it. I thought it looked really great.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: TheSnalf on January 10, 2011, 05:35:51 am
When you post something up on an open forum and ask "how does it look" you should understand that that all comments will not say that what you've posted is wonderful.
This is your first try and there is always room for improvement. To improve you need to handle the harsh critiques that might be thrown your way. Even if the critique might be seen by you as negative, the writer might have seen it as a positive. Before putting yourself down ask them to elaborate and ask for suggestions on how to improve.

I'm very sorry that you deleted this. I really liked the swirl markings on the neck. Hopefully I'll be able to give critique on your next one.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 10, 2011, 06:05:29 am
i know what you mean but ive had a lot of critique in my life and FeralHeart i wanted to get away from the things that have dragged me down. Having that....comment as a first post...I didn't need that. It's still there but...like that picture I deleted that I did for the FH team....I felt so horrible when someone did something so much better so i deleted it. it looked so dumb anyway....I shoulnt have even tried to express that i appreciate all the FH team has done...Anyway whatever...thanks for the comment....
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: TheSnalf on January 10, 2011, 06:46:22 am
You should have more faith in yourself. When you say thing like "it looked so dumb anyway....I shouldn't have even tried" You're tearing yourself down. YOU are creating and wallowing in your own sorrow. People try to get in but its hard when someone doesn't have the confidence to open up and shine. DO what you want to do, what makes you happy. It doesn't matter what others think, what people call it, or even if someone is better at it. As long as you're having fun, as long you enjoy it, do it.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 10, 2011, 08:18:50 am
I stopped having fun because I dont think the FH team would even like something that isnt good looking...They'd juss be embarrassed to have someone who cant draw in their community...The drawing got no attention and everyone else's did...no matter how good they were. So yea, see they didnt care and when people dont care about what I do I don't feel good anymore.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: TheSnalf on January 10, 2011, 08:43:45 am
How will you know what the FH team is thinking? Again, you're making accusations and putting YOUR thoughts into what you think other people are thinking. Who are you to know if someone likes something if you don't ask that person. People don't have to reply to a topic. It doesn't mean that you suck, it just means that they didn't comment. It's the sad truth, sometimes you just cant get noticed but look at this topic! You have to TRY, if you don't post anything up how will you ever know what people think? Even if just a few people have commented shared their thoughts it is better then none at all, but instead of being happy about these comments you complain about them. Becoming upset that someone didn't like your hard work. Then when you learn what people think you must accept their views even if you do not agree with them. Until you have found out what these people think you shouldn't put yourself down. It's scary yes, but until you do it your mind will run wild with "What Ifs" making it even harder when you do show others.  
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 10, 2011, 09:15:44 am
Oh, but its what people have thought that made me want to never draw again. and it wasnt a handful of commments either. I think it's you who needs to see things from my eyes.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: TheSnalf on January 10, 2011, 09:46:16 am
You can never truly see something from the point of view of another but you can try to understand where their coming from. Hateful comments shouldn't bring you down, rise above what they think of you and prove them wrong about your art. Strive to get better and don't sulk around because of some internet people you've never met. Learn new techniques ,explore different tutorials, widen you artistic ability and then laugh when you realize how silly those haters were to think that you could never become great and how silly you were to think that their terrible words meant a thing.

 
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Lavender on January 10, 2011, 11:32:01 am
This is awesome!


Really good for a first try! Keep it up ^.^!
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 10, 2011, 11:43:42 am
thats...awful....and self-centered and greedy.  Karma doesn't work in that sense. I'm not going to get better so i can show them that they're wrong. It's a waste of time doing that for one person. It's a lot of people and people I know in real life. Also, I won't continue this conversation here. PM me if you wish. It's just reminding me of something that I wished never happened.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Surreal on January 10, 2011, 12:25:20 pm
I'm a little confused why you deleted this In the first place, You asked people to tell you what they thought of It.
They gave you their own opinion, Like you asked for.

Your presets aren't bad at all, In fact there pretty damn good for a first try.

Don't let a simple sentence put you down, Critique Is In fact a way to getting better look at It that way.
Also If you don't care for critique, As long as you enjoy doing the art why should you care what other's think.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 10, 2011, 12:31:35 pm
I havent deleted it yet but im not sure what to do with it at the moment.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Surreal on January 10, 2011, 12:33:17 pm
Sorry, I meant Why would you want to. XD
But I would leave It up If I were you, You have really nice presets
And look at all these people saying nice thing's about them. :`D
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 11, 2011, 02:54:17 am
I might make another one soon. Could someone tell me how to post a picture without having to put a link?
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Xava on January 11, 2011, 03:10:05 am
: ) Press Print Screen/SysRq (That will take a screen shot) and paste it into paint.
Then you can resize or crop it, followed by saving and uploading it to Photobucket, or another image hosting site.
Then, copy and paste the IMG code.

^_^ Hope that helps!
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 11, 2011, 03:15:31 am
(http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1024/presetupdated.jpg) (http://img98.imageshack.us/i/presetupdated.jpg/) I think its too big ):

Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Xava on January 11, 2011, 03:18:30 am
It's great if you're posting it so people can look at it.
^_^ Most people like looking at large images so they can get a better look at things.
You can also make a box around your preset itself, and copy+paste as new image, and it'll be just the wolf and nothing else.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 11, 2011, 03:52:28 am
I think it posted the original size. I think I should re-size it with Photoshop or something...
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Xava on January 11, 2011, 03:57:34 am
You don't need Photoshop to resize it.
Photobucket and Paint can resize also.
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 11, 2011, 04:42:54 am
(http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/7311/headshotpreset.png) (http://img411.imageshack.us/i/headshotpreset.png/)

A headshot to show the markings on the head.

Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Xava on January 11, 2011, 05:30:37 am
Oooh, that's so pretty!
And the eyes have so much detail..
^_^ You reall did a good job!
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Jewelz on January 11, 2011, 05:38:30 am
Wow, that's amazing! I really like all the different details and markings. Keep up the good work. ;3
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on January 11, 2011, 08:32:51 am
I kind of copied the eyes i had open in another window in photoshop....x.x
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Miette on January 12, 2011, 12:16:59 am
I like all of the markings, they remind me of the ocean :o
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Anarchy99 on March 19, 2011, 05:39:43 pm
its nice
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Zodiac on March 20, 2011, 04:17:03 pm
Looks like some futeristic wolf. You must have put lots of effort. :)
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: freedom on April 12, 2011, 06:17:29 am
I made a new one!

(http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/165/screenshot0412201101410.png) (http://img153.imageshack.us/i/screenshot0412201101410.png/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Usiku on April 13, 2011, 10:59:56 am
Those details are cool! But they are hard to see in the game when character is moving I tought :c
Title: Re: first try...
Post by: Flames33 on May 08, 2011, 09:48:55 pm
good job