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An small curse.
« on: March 01, 2018, 08:40:11 am »
This is an small... curse story I made... for my own world..

Read on if you dare.

Racida is an ghost that is of unknown origin, that appears near the villages of the continent of Vulcarum.
It usually appears around railway crossings or children's play areas. It has an rather weird look, having an animal-esque head and children's clothing.

The origin of this being is unknown, but it is rumoured to be an small chao who loved to wear animal masks,
but ended up being stalked, and being thrown onto the rails of an nearby crossing. You can guess what happened.

On the 18th of every month, if you go outside beyond the time limits of 9:00 PM, you may encounter this being. It will hold an item that easily pops. It will stare at you. DO NOT LOOK AWAY FROM IT. It will stare at you for 30 seconds.

Afterwards, Racida will ask you an question which is the following; "What is my name?"
Reply that their name is Ida. As that was their actual name before death. Racida in transalation means 'animal head devil'.

Answering anything other than Ida will result in death.

But an answer is unique, and you can answer an neutral one, to escape.
Answering Ida will grant you access to leave.

The other answer is Ayer. Ayer was the name of something that Racida used to love.
Ayer was an canine of the Labrador variant.

It will act surprised.

However, you are not free. An way to get it off your 'tail' is if you answer the Ayer question.
If you give the spirit an brownish red Labrador puppy, it will go away happily.
It is obvious why.

Are you brave enough to face it?

[Criticism is accepted!]

[Colouration and looks of Racida are open to intrepretation....]
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Re: An small curse.
« Reply #1 on: March 01, 2018, 04:05:08 pm »
i like the concept of a ghost being sent off with a puppy so it wont kill you

this is pretty good for a short explainer

good work yo

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Re: An small curse.
« Reply #2 on: March 01, 2018, 05:18:58 pm »
Great story!
How does Racida kill those who give the wrong answer?

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Re: An small curse.
« Reply #3 on: March 01, 2018, 11:04:10 pm »
i like the concept of a ghost being sent off with a puppy so it wont kill you

this is pretty good for a short explainer

good work yo


thank u :>

Great story!
How does Racida kill those who give the wrong answer?

thank you

and the way racida kills is via the popped item because the shrieking is insanely loud and probably would kill you

this is my first story so it will probably b weird when i look back on it??
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