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Re: Elements (next chapters here!)
« Reply #20 on: April 27, 2020, 11:36:13 pm »
Why would anyone yell at a pup? That's just mean.

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« Reply #21 on: April 28, 2020, 09:30:13 am »
Why would anyone yell at a pup? That's just mean.
'Cause Janama is mean.
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« Reply #22 on: April 28, 2020, 01:34:49 pm »
Chapter 11
News of the volcano worked well. Janama cursed quietly and then ordered a retreat.
"If I see any white wolf again, I swear I'll tear him apart!" Hasel growled after a moment.
"It's not their fault," Julie replied. "Haven't you noticed? These wolves are just afraid of Janama, whom they can't resist."
Garin and Hasel exchanged glances.
"I don't think you can trust them," Garin muttered.
Julie raised an eyebrow.
"I am not saying that we are to ally with them right away."
"But that's how it sounded," Hasel snapped.
"Stop!" shouted Dernial and several other warriors.
"Let's set. If you meet any wolf from the Wind or Water clan, you can chase him. I repeat: CHEASE him. Don't kill." she looked at Hasel. "But if you meet Janama, you have the right to pounce on him. That's my decision."
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« Reply #23 on: April 29, 2020, 05:27:05 pm »
Chapter 12
Julie was lying in her lair. She thought about Hasel's reaction. Well, it's similar to him. But this exchange of looks with Garin ... after all, Garin was not like that.
Her thoughts were interrupted by the entrance of one of the puppies.
"Ehmmm ... good morning ..." he muttered uncertainly.
"Hello," she answered gently. "What are you doing here?"
"Because I... I saw..."
The puppy took a deep breath.
"I heard you say about the wolves of the Water and Wind pack ... that we shouldn't hurt them ... but I saw two warriors who clawed at a pregnant she-wolf walking on the border."
Julie frowned.
"Do you know the names of these warriors?"
"It seems to me that one is Hasel and the other... I don't remember but probably on G."
"Good. Thank you for reporting. You can leave."
The puppy nodded obediently. Julie went back to her thoughts. She almost fell asleep when she suddenly realized that the warrior who had broken the ban was Garin! Like a boomerang, Dernial's words came back to her: "Let us hope that nobody will betray us..."
Julie jumped up from the lair.
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« Reply #24 on: April 29, 2020, 07:05:00 pm »
Yikes. She got betrayed by her own pack mates !

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« Reply #25 on: April 30, 2020, 01:13:11 pm »
Chapter 13
Julie jumped out as if she was burned. She immediately ran to the lair of Garin, Hasel and Dernial. She found Dernial there.
"Dernial. Dernial, wake up!"
"What... Garin, get off..."
He opened one eye. At the sight of the leader immediately stood up.
"What happened?" he murmured a little sleepy yet.
"Where are Hasel and Garin ?!"
"Well, here..." he pointed to the empty bed. "Or not."
They ran out of the cave immediately. Dernial quickly caught a fresh lead. The trail led north toward the border. They reached the border, but did not dare to cross it. Suddenly Julie noticed two black wolves walking side by side with Janama.

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« Reply #26 on: May 01, 2020, 04:20:15 pm »
Chapter 14
Julie is furious. Garin and Hasel were her friends. Yes, strange, it's true, but still friends. She growled softly. However, Dernial silenced her. He wanted to eavesdrop on what they were talking about.
"And this Julie, doesn't she suspect anything?" Janama asked.
"No, she is rather chosen by the Great Owl for no idea. Not for a wise leader, at any rate," Garin replied.
All three laughed.
"Go for the strongest warriors. I will stay here. When you come, you are waiting for my sign in these bushes." Julie pointed to a large patch of shrubs.
"Do you want to stay here ?! And how do they smell you? What will you do then?" terrified Dernial flooded her with questions.
"I will improvise," she replied. "Now run, quickly!"
Dernial nodded and sprinted toward the cave.
Julie raised her ear.
"So where are your army hosts?" Hasel growled distrustfully.
"What are they talking about" Julie thought.
And then she saw hundreds of white wolves leaning out from behind the snowy bushes.
"Lead to caves!" laughed Janama.
"No" thought Julie. "No no no!"
They wanted to kill a pack of Fire and Earth!
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« Reply #27 on: May 06, 2020, 04:16:40 pm »
Chapter 15
Julie decided to meet them. He must stop them somehow.
"Well, well." she hissed bravely. "I could have guessed."
Hasel and Garin stood terrified. At first Janama just looked at their reaction, but after a moment of silence he also stood there.
Julie had no idea what they meant, but she bared her teeth. She also sensed that her pack wolves were standing right behind her. Dernial stood next to Julie.
"We trusted you ..." Tears leaked from his eyes.
The aura has changed. At first it was quite calm. But after a while animals came out from behind the bushes and trees. They were mainly white deer, rabbits and wild boars. It wouldn't be a big advantage in battle, but there were hordes of them. For this it will be difficult for them to fight in the snow, which covers the entire territory of the Wind and Water Clan.
But Julie has changed. There was fire in her eyes. Even if she dies, he'll do it for a pack. She didn't care anymore how history would tell about her.
"ATTACK!" she screamed.

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« Reply #28 on: May 06, 2020, 04:59:24 pm »
Ummmm.. Poor Julie :(

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« Reply #29 on: May 07, 2020, 05:58:04 pm »
Chapter 16
The animals lunged at each other. A great black and white storm began. Julie decided to take revenge on Hasel and Garina. She saw them withdrawn. In the end they decided to run away. Julie wasn't going to allow it.
"Wait, won't you say goodbye to me?" she sneered.
They both looked at her in horror. The fire was waking up in her. She felt it all over her body. In the end, she did what she always wanted as a child. She took fire. It was on fire. And she knew it well.
Hasel and Garin fled. They ran past the Holy Tree but suddenly stood paralyzed. The tree could not let traitors live. Not in Aella. They melted away. Nature sent them to the world of people as dogs.
Julie looked around. There was a massacre around. She managed to catch Dernial's scent. She looked this way. He fought with Janama. He losing. Julie immediately ran that way.

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