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FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: GoodWolf on September 21, 2013, 07:41:18 pm

Title: Judgement
Post by: GoodWolf on September 21, 2013, 07:41:18 pm
You may wander around, trying to catch my eye
But I catch yours before you even know it.
You try to get me to notice you, but I already have.
You try to impress me, but it does not work.
You try your own ways to get a girl, but I'm not the one who likes to get fooled,
And I could tell, which is which in you,
By judgment.
Title: Re: Judgement
Post by: gold feathers on November 02, 2013, 11:17:05 pm
very interesting technique you used there in your poem. I would love to see more though xD