FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: Jessy10 on June 20, 2014, 05:47:55 pm
Title: Nothing But Darkness...
Post by: Jessy10 on June 20, 2014, 05:47:55 pm
I made a poem that doesn't rhyme ;) :). Hope it's okay. I didn't have nothing else to do! Any who, I am not a big fan of poetry, so if it doesn't sound all that great, my apologies. Hope ya like it!
Darkness encloses around me Covering me like a cloak I feel trapped I fight my way towards the light. Am I forever lost? Day in, day out... I fight. I feel like I will never come out of this Will I every make it?
Title: Re: Nothing But Darkness...
Post by: Vespian on June 20, 2014, 05:51:58 pm
I like the ominous atmosphere it gives the reader. Not all poetry consists of rhymes so that outtake is nothin' to be considered a flaw. A job well done, ma'am. I enjoyed what ye've provided.
Title: Re: Nothing But Darkness...
Post by: shayy on June 20, 2014, 06:20:42 pm
Very beautiful poem, you should consider posting more c: