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Title: Gone
Post by: _Rache_ on August 17, 2014, 08:05:43 am

Please feel free to comment but just please no hate. This is how I feel since I was recently kicked out of a group; leaving everything I loved behind and scratching my history and everything. I'm really depressed and that's when my literature skills flourish. I have no clue what kind of poem this is I guess it is free verse. And this is like a true 'story', what do I mean by like? It's a story in a poem form. Nobody can really make out the story in this except some friends and I.

I am gone.
Everything I worked for
Everything I loved
Gone.
My past,
My story,
My history,
Gone like a drawing in the sand.
Gone like a plastic bag in the breeze.
You ripped my love out of my arms.
You ripped me apart.
My soul has diminished into blackness and eternal sadness
My heart is now bitter and cold.
My soul is screaming to be saved
By the savior who will never come
The drama is killer
The depression is deadly
You just had to rip me apart
Turning me into something I never wanted to become
A depressed mess
I'm gone anywho
My soul has diminished into something sad and blank
My heart is now bitter and cold
Tears eternally sting my eyes
Like the scars in my reflection
I am gone

Want to know the story? I'm going to post it changing names for personal information in the Story topic.

Title: Re: Gone
Post by: Kastilla on August 17, 2014, 03:16:21 pm

It's beautiful~
 I am very sorry for your depression, if you ever need anyone to talk to, I am here for you.

Title: Re: Gone
Post by: _Rache_ on August 17, 2014, 04:03:39 pm

Thank you.

Title: Re: Gone
Post by: Kastilla on August 17, 2014, 06:28:55 pm

No problem.

Title: Re: Gone
Post by: Kipjen on August 19, 2014, 02:56:42 am

oh my Im  sorry.! ;~;  okay here is something that helps if im depressed:i look at kittens/puppies/baby nightfuries or the cutest things i can think of and i get a cupcake. If this doesn't work......im not going to say that im a therapist but i tried to help ^^   

Title: Re: Gone
Post by: Kipjen on August 19, 2014, 02:58:28 am

it almost made me cry @_@                      -walks into a wall-

Title: Re: Gone
Post by: _Rache_ on August 19, 2014, 05:04:45 am

Thank you for the advice and support darling.

Title: Re: Gone
Post by: Kipjen on August 19, 2014, 01:54:37 pm

^^ np anything to make people happy!

Title: Re: Gone
Post by: Likopinina on August 21, 2014, 03:44:59 pm

Great story! I loved it!