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Offline kaylakh10

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Field of Flowers
« on: June 20, 2014, 06:28:21 pm »
Hey, just wanted to try out alittle poetry. I saw one of my feral heart friends do one so I want to try it. Hope it satisfies any readers! Don't forget to comment and tell me how you feel about it  :P ;D :D ;) :).

Field of Flowers

I walk out into the sunlight...
It beats against my skin and I breath in the fresh air.
Flowers... flowers all around me, as far as I can see.
Lovely with their soft, multi-colored petals.
I run my hands over them as I walk.


Flowers all around, toss in the breeze,
Letting go of their loose petals...
Carried away by the wind.

Flowers... flowers everywhere.
Beauty all around me, I catch my breath.
Come with me in the Field of Flowers...
where we can live at peace forever,
And ever...



Hey, my user name is kaylakh10 in the game
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See you soon.
Kayla :)

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Re: Field of Flowers
« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2014, 06:30:17 pm »
Beautiful poem c: Consider posting more please, this is marvelous
pm for free art i need practice