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Title: "Ashes" -A poem describing the life of a persecuted wolf-
Post by: catsanddogsandbirds on February 14, 2013, 02:16:42 am

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They came for me in the night
A night as black as death
They came with howls and snarls
Teeth glistening bright

They took me from my home
They dragged me through the dust
They killed my only family
But I never surrendered

They tossed me in the flames
They chanted and yelled
They ignored my cries of pain
As I burned down and down

The flames finally took hold of me
I fell, dark and sad
I finally joined my burnt family
Forever ashes
from an evil fire

Title: Re: "Ashes" -A poem describing the life of a persecuted wolf-
Post by: wolfdog01 on February 14, 2013, 02:28:38 am

Whoa.....that's kinda....deep o.o and...
AWESOME! :D That was amazing! You'd be a good poet ^^
+floof

Title: Re: "Ashes" -A poem describing the life of a persecuted wolf-
Post by: catsanddogsandbirds on February 14, 2013, 02:38:42 am

Thanks, Thyme. I've had this idea stuck in my ol' noggin for days now :P But every time I had the opportunity to write or type it, I forgot. I have like ten drawings of this wolf's spirit, looking down at his ashes. A couple of them are him looking, with fire and anger in his eyes, at the wolves that killed him. Thinkin' I should write a story based on this...

 ya' think I should?

Title: Re: "Ashes" -A poem describing the life of a persecuted wolf-
Post by: wolfdog01 on February 14, 2013, 08:00:52 pm

DEFINATLY!
Just make sure you stick to the story lol, I'm VERY slowly working on my story, it all depends if you really enjoy doing this ^^ But I think it would be awesome

Title: Re: "Ashes" -A poem describing the life of a persecuted wolf-
Post by: catsanddogsandbirds on February 14, 2013, 10:31:13 pm

I'll see what I can do :3

Title: Re: "Ashes" -A poem describing the life of a persecuted wolf-
Post by: peachbreeze on April 01, 2013, 03:15:51 am

The first line my heart started beating. Faster and faster o.o
Ermergerd, its SO good.

Title: Re: "Ashes" -A poem describing the life of a persecuted wolf-
Post by: BouncyLion101 on April 01, 2013, 04:29:08 am

D: Poor wolfie..

This is very sad and a nice little poem though. c: You did a good job writing it.
:D

Title: Re: "Ashes" -A poem describing the life of a persecuted wolf-
Post by: catsanddogsandbirds on April 01, 2013, 01:03:21 pm

Wow. Well thanks guys ;3

Title: Re: "Ashes" -A poem describing the life of a persecuted wolf-
Post by: DuskPegasister on July 07, 2013, 07:14:25 pm

This poem is very nice! I love, love LOVE poems like this. Keep up the good work. ;D

Title: Re: "Ashes" -A poem describing the life of a persecuted wolf-
Post by: gold feathers on November 02, 2013, 11:22:16 pm

This poem is amazing. A lot of emotion put into this as "A struggle of a wolf and then the death". I would Love to see more from your art xD