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Title: A howl, like a poem
Post by: crosscreature on April 23, 2013, 02:42:33 am
A Howl

A howl, it's a majestic melody mastered by the courageous creatures,
Known as wolves.
They howl through the night as if they were singers at an all night concert.
The howl can symbolize many things such as,
Danger, Love calling, or a simple song for their ancestors.
As courageous as the wolves are,
Their howls are also.
The wolf will howl and howl to the blue corn moon,
As if it was painting the wind.
Like an artist, they sing to resemble their personality,
Their voice, and their life.
Only the wolves can read the painting in the wind,
As we have not yet been able to crack the code.
A howl, its a majestic melody mastered by the courageous creatures,
Known as wolves.

hope you liked my poem! if you think i did a bad job please tell me (don't judge) and give me some pointers because its my first poem that i've posted ~shakes~

Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: BouncyLion101 on April 23, 2013, 03:05:55 am
Beautiful. <3
While reading this I imagined wolves howling into a rainbow, ha.

Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: crosscreature on April 24, 2013, 01:13:32 am
thanks Bouncy Lion :) i'm thinking about doing a sequel to this poem like "A Roar" and other sounds that animals make do you think that would be cool? :-\
Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: BouncyLion101 on April 24, 2013, 03:53:10 am
It also sounds like a really good idea, would love to see it happen, Forest Spirit. ^.^
It would be really awesome to read, Forest Spirit. c:

Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: crosscreature on April 24, 2013, 09:43:47 pm
thank you bouncy lion i'm lookin up research about roars the poem will come momentarily. :)
Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: crosscreature on April 25, 2013, 01:05:08 am
I present to you...
A Roar
A roar, it's a beautiful chime mastered by the fearless creatures,
Known as big cats.
We humans, hear them as horrifying screams,
But what are they really?
For big cats, roars are to communicate, find love, and to scare their prey.
As they roar out into the plains or forest, other big cats can hear them and roar back.
A roar is like a baby's cry.
They cry through the day and night for attention and caring.
Similar with a cats roar.
It's a calling for attention and caring.
A roar, its a beautiful chime mastered by the fearless creatures,
Known as big cats.


Did you like it? post below if you did. :D
Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: BouncyLion101 on April 25, 2013, 02:29:39 am
As good as the first poem. c:
And I like what you called the lions, "Fearless cats"

You should have more comments on this thread, your poems are very pretty and calm.
Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: crosscreature on April 25, 2013, 11:24:51 pm
thank you Bouncy Lion! I think there should be more comments too but I guess people aren't interested in poems anymore or they just don't have time to come on. IDK? :-\
Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: greenart6 on April 26, 2013, 02:44:18 am
Your poems are so calm and beautiful ^^ I especially like your "A Roar" poem. c:
Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: crosscreature on April 28, 2013, 10:32:34 pm
thanks Devynrex :) what kind of other poems should I do next?
Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: demonicplague2 on May 01, 2013, 01:49:50 am
awesome poems i like "A Howl" and for more ideas maybe... like "A Neigh" or (for something funny) "A Moo" LMAO :D
Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: crosscreature on June 25, 2013, 01:26:54 am
OK i'll try, i just don't know much about moo's i'll do some research on it.
Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: Smol.png on June 26, 2013, 11:33:39 pm
I love both poems, beautiful job <3
Title: Re: A howl, like a poem
Post by: crosscreature on July 11, 2013, 04:16:07 am
Thank you BeautifulMystery! :)