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FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: PotatoPotPie on June 18, 2014, 05:50:23 pm

Title: Playtime
Post by: PotatoPotPie on June 18, 2014, 05:50:23 pm

Young.
Innocent.
Free.
Growing up was a pain...
But you had to.
So you put away your chalk
Crayons
Markers
And faced the real world.
Playtime was over.

Another freeverse!
This one actually made me sad though :(

Title: Re: Playtime
Post by: Sherlockian on June 18, 2014, 05:58:42 pm

Although it is a very good poem, and I can really relate to this, try not to include cuss words as they are forbidden on this forum. ^^ I've removed the word for the time being, though you are free to replace that word with a more appropriate word.

Title: Re: Playtime
Post by: PotatoPotPie on June 18, 2014, 06:35:44 pm

Quote from: Sherlockian on June 18, 2014, 05:58:42 pm

Although it is a very good poem, and I can really relate to this, try not to include cuss words as they are forbidden on this forum. ^^ I've removed the word for the time being, though you are free to replace that word with a more appropriate word.

Sorry <3 I kinda let the poem get to me, won't happen again!

Title: Re: Playtime
Post by: Sherlockian on June 18, 2014, 06:49:11 pm

It's okie, everyone makes mistakes c:
Love chur poem thu, I really like it!

Title: Re: Playtime
Post by: shayy on June 18, 2014, 07:11:01 pm

I love this poem! You should make more ;)

Title: Re: Playtime
Post by: PotatoPotPie on June 18, 2014, 07:14:37 pm

Quote from: Sherlockian on June 18, 2014, 06:49:11 pm

It's okie, everyone makes mistakes c:
Love chur poem thu, I really like it!

:) Thanks

Quote from: S-H-A-Y on June 18, 2014, 07:11:01 pm

I love this poem! You should make more ;)

Thanks! I plan to make a whole lot more! :)