FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: Thornscars on October 20, 2015, 02:24:23 am
Title: Little Lost Memories
Post by: Thornscars on October 20, 2015, 02:24:23 am
This is a poem of stuff I've kind of forgotten over time, but then tonight, I remembered all of them... a lot of these reference preschool, but some reference times after preschool too. (NO, MY BROTHER ISN'T DEAD, HE JUST DOESN'T LIKE ROUGH HOUSING ANYMORE.) Here goes...
Nothing is known, until it is lost Remember the pattern on the bathroom sink; the one you thought looked like a wolf? Remember the times that you rough-housed with your brother, The times that you thought your feet were best friends? The ones where you thought you were a tiger at the doctor's? Don't you remember, those sweet little things? You blew bubbles with your best friend on the play structure at school, You rolled the hula-hoops down the hill, every single day, Remember all the friends you had? The penguin, the sparrow, and the blue bear? When you watched those simple shows on TV, That taught you what you knew, The words I have used, just to speak to you, Hopefully these little lost memories will come back to your mind, And when they do, You'll smile too, And I'll be proud of you.
Title: Re: Little Lost Memories
Post by: .BlackCrow. on October 20, 2015, 07:52:33 am
Amazing poetry skills ;D Keep it up! It is really good.
Title: Re: Little Lost Memories
Post by: Thornscars on October 20, 2015, 03:12:52 pm
Thank you, that means a lot to me!
Title: Re: Little Lost Memories
Post by: Warriorstrike on October 20, 2015, 03:35:49 pm
You've got a lovely poem here. I enjoyed how you used specific instances from your life (or others) that relate to past memories, other than simply generalizing details. Nice work. c:
Title: Re: Little Lost Memories
Post by: Thornscars on October 21, 2015, 12:12:28 am
Thank you, this is the first time I've tried doing something like that, before my poems were more inspired by fanfiction than anything else.