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Offline kaylakh10

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River of Life
« on: June 20, 2014, 06:51:43 pm »
I decided to try my luck on another poem since I hadn't done all that bad on the last one. Hope you like this one too!

River of Life

Along the River... the River of Life,
The fish swim and the ducks are in flight.
The water sparkles like liquid diamonds,
as the sun shines from above.

Water lilles grow at it's banks
and the animals of the land go for a drink
from the water of the River of Life.

Frogs rest in the shallows
as their offspring swims around them.
Dragon flies flutter their wings
As they fly against the breeze.

The water swirls,
it's current takes it far.
Keeping the creatures of the world alive
The River of Life lives on forever...

...Always ensuring the promise of life...


« Last Edit: June 20, 2014, 06:54:52 pm by Kayla »
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Re: River of Life
« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2014, 06:55:31 pm »
Marvelous poem!
pm for free art i need practice