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FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Stories => Topic started by: Haruki on October 21, 2012, 05:27:28 am

Title: Into the Catacombs
Post by: Haruki on October 21, 2012, 05:27:28 am

Title: Re: Into the Catacombs
Post by: Haruki on October 21, 2012, 05:28:46 am

Title: Re: Into the Catacombs
Post by: Haruki on October 21, 2012, 05:41:21 am

Save.

Title: Re: Into the Catacombs
Post by: Haruki on October 21, 2012, 05:41:34 am

Save

Title: Re: Into the Catacombs
Post by: Haruki on October 21, 2012, 05:42:02 am

Sorry. The council members claimed this post. :c

Title: Re: Into the Catacombs
Post by: Haruki on October 21, 2012, 05:42:23 am

Okay, final save. Feel free to post.

Title: Re: Into the Catacombs
Post by: Haruki on October 21, 2012, 07:43:22 am

Alrighty, guys. Chapter one is up. I intend on finishing this story. It really does get interesting as we go. Feel free to toss me some critique, it's always appreciated.

If only a few people actually take the time to read this, that'll make me oh so happy. I realize it's unrealistic to ask people to take a lot of time out of their lives to analyze a piece of amateur literature, but the few people who do are invaluable.

Title: Re: Into the Catacombs
Post by: Zaroque on October 21, 2012, 11:40:49 am

Very good, Haruki. Your story structure seems good in my eyes. ~ +Floof.

Title: Re: Into the Catacombs
Post by: Haruki on October 21, 2012, 11:13:55 pm

Thankya muchly. x3
I'm purposefully attempting to make the language colloquial. Or at least semi-so.

Title: Re: Into the Catacombs
Post by: Haruki on October 22, 2012, 05:41:54 am

Chapter 2 is up. Major plot revealed.