FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Stories => Topic started by: TheRealRainbowChan on June 10, 2016, 06:17:05 pm
Title: My First Creepypasta AND FH Story!
Post by: TheRealRainbowChan on June 10, 2016, 06:17:05 pm
(Before I start. I would LOVE for people to tell me how I did.)
My eyes opened, they even felt heavy, but I managed to sit up on my bed. I glance at my alarm clock, it read 5:30. I wince slightly, I didn't really want to bother going back to sleep. So I simply bend over and grab up a computer, it is worn, but It works good enough. I go to the familiar website and smile at the familiarize, "Its good to be back" I have a warm smile on my face and sign in. After I sign in, the screen goes black for a few seconds, but I pass this off as a glitch, these do happen often for this old guy. I click the play game link and sign in again, then move to my desktop to click the application. Everything seems familiar, I jack up my Headphones to listen to the amazing music. It sounds, off.... It has a slightly deeper tone, Again I pass this off as nothing and sign in and I am greeted with the character screen, I click my favorite, "Avery" I smile seeing her familiar design, My first... When I enter Im immediately sent to a strange map, Its a lonely snow covered mountain, I see a campfire in the distance, I stare in wonder at my screen. "Must be a new map..." she Dash towards the light, did i mention it was nighttime? When I get there.. I see a strange sight, There are a few players laying on the ground, the others who are up... They seem distorted in a way, "Strange..." I mutter to myself. Then I hear a sound.. No.. Muttering... From inside the game... Every few seconds I can hear a faint, "Help me..", My screen goes black again, when it comes back, all the players who were standing were laying down, I spam the chatbox asking what could be going on... But no answers accept the same "Help Me." I turn around and see a another live player, I almost cheer for joy, But Their Username.... It read "THEREISNOESCAPE" My character freezes, their face in terror, I didn't press anything at all, and they keep approaching. The screen turns black for a third time, I hear a Shout, no. A screech, saying "HELP ME!!" my computer shuts down, I don't bother turning it back on, But, Im unable to, as for a few seconds a sit there, I black out, falling unconscious on my bed. I wake up, A bright light shines in my eyes, I am In the hospital, I glance at my arm, There is a large gash in it. I stay away from Feral Heart from now on, Ive gotten rid of that old computer and gotten a new one, But... Tonight I heard the familiar whispers of "Help me", Send help, Before I get the same end as Avery....
(Whew! That was a long one! I hope you liked!!)
Title: Re: My First Creepypasta AND FH Story!
Post by: Misty81 on June 10, 2016, 06:34:13 pm
This is awesome. :)
Title: Re: My First Creepypasta AND FH Story!
Post by: Hakumi on June 10, 2016, 06:49:48 pm
Loved it so much, how to read it again. Lovely job floof, hope to see more from you ^.^
Title: Re: My First Creepypasta AND FH Story!
Post by: Kynvuu on June 10, 2016, 07:32:12 pm
Love the story, your writing is really nice<3 Hope to see more from you as well! c:
Title: Re: My First Creepypasta AND FH Story!
Post by: ArcticGalaxy on June 10, 2016, 09:22:18 pm
Wow, this is amazing! And slightly creepy. But that's the whole point of this. xD Great job!
Title: Re: My First Creepypasta AND FH Story!
Post by: Reaper on June 11, 2016, 05:02:29 pm
Wow, that was spooky, and very suspenseful. I hope to hear more stories from you, good job. :3
Title: Re: My First Creepypasta AND FH Story!
Post by: ToxicWolf9876 on August 07, 2016, 12:26:41 am
amazing story and spooky i hope you write more .3.
Title: Re: My First Creepypasta AND FH Story!
Post by: Vwang on August 07, 2016, 01:40:20 am
Impressive. But the username THEREISNOESCAPE might be a user that exists but has nothing to do with that XD But so impressive How am I gonna sleep tonight? XD R.I.P Avery :( I guess she was attacked by THEREISNOESCAPE user