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FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Stories => Topic started by: Loccora on July 28, 2016, 07:55:23 pm
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So, I kinda need some advice for a book I'm working on writing. One of the characters is being tortured but eventually escapes, which isn't really the point. Later on, she comes across the one who was torturing her and the two eventually become friends, that part I already know. The only problem is, how can I get the girl who was tortured (Cypher) to trust her torturer enough to befriend her? Thoughts? Any ideas would be great! Thanks, and I sure hope you all have some ideas....thanks!
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"I think that you could make it sound like the torturer wass doing it against his will- like he didn't want to hurt anyone. Then maybe the girl can sort of warm up to him a bit like "hey, yeah, you were forced to hurt me. It was someone else being mean, not you." But I dunno lol"
that was from my sister, who is pretty good at writing stories ^.^ (she typed it)
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"I think that you could make it sound like the torturer wass doing it against his will- like he didn't want to hurt anyone. Then maybe the girl can sort of warm up to him a bit like "hey, yeah, you were forced to hurt me. It was someone else being mean, not you." But I dunno lol"
that was from my sister, who is pretty good at writing stories ^.^ (she typed it)
Fantasy suggestion>> Perhaps you could make it to where the torturer was under some kind of spell/enchantment to do the things he/she did to Cypher. Realistic fiction suggestion>> Or you could say the torturer was being tortured himself/herself and was forced to torture Cypher.
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Depending on how the torturer character was/is going to be developed, and on the fact if there is a commanding force behind the torturer, you may also add a psychological disorder to their personality in which they must do harm in order to be satisfied, but is nice otherwise and has to carry this burden. Kinda like a split personality I assume?
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So you are basing it on the Stockholm Syndrome, right?