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FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: Mz.Keeboo on October 05, 2011, 12:49:09 pm

Title: -Breaking Out Of This Cage-
Post by: Mz.Keeboo on October 05, 2011, 12:49:09 pm
The look of your face as I step out in silence
This place you put me in because of my violence
Your face of shock, once full of color now draining
As the metal chains are no longer restraining

For all of those years all I had was time
Locked up in this harsh cage for all of my crimes
On the world I will now unleash my furry
After I kill you: my judge and jury

This puddle of blood where I now stand
It is now time for me to start my plan
I have nothing more too lose since you killed my love
Sending his soul to the stars above

Now considered a fallen angel and an omen of death
Your fate was sealed when my dearest drew his last breath
The eve of destruction is now very near
No longer human, I am the thing that you fear.
Title: Re: -Breaking Out Of This Cage-
Post by: Reckoning on October 05, 2011, 02:06:45 pm
Not bad.  Lol It started like I would expect from a poem about a cage, and then it turned into a tale of revenge.
What inspired this peom?
I usually find inspiration in my sorrow.
Title: Re: -Breaking Out Of This Cage-
Post by: DungeonSiegeWolf on October 16, 2011, 11:10:13 pm
pure awesomeness <3
Title: Re: -Breaking Out Of This Cage-
Post by: Password on October 17, 2011, 10:47:54 pm
Lol I love this poem, it's so detailed and emotional. You are a really good writer, that is if this poem is your own lol xx
Title: Re: -Breaking Out Of This Cage-
Post by: Mz.Keeboo on November 03, 2011, 04:47:29 pm
Quote from: Password on October 17, 2011, 10:47:54 pm
Lol I love this poem, it's so detailed and emotional. You are a really good writer, that is if this poem is your own lol xx

Hahaha It Is... and thank you
Title: Re: -Breaking Out Of This Cage-
Post by: Ingredient on January 26, 2012, 01:11:35 pm
I really enjoy this poem, revenge is kinda my thing >:D