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FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: Wolfish Grin on November 24, 2011, 01:26:49 am

Title: S.O.S.
Post by: Wolfish Grin on November 24, 2011, 01:26:49 am
It's such a shame there are hardly any poems here...

 S.O.S.

~I'm singing alone, my soul cryin' out.
Always a hollow bone, always left in doubt...

~I'm falling apart, barely breathing.
With a heart, torn & bleedin'...

~Crying through rain, hiding from fears.
Dying from pain, choking with tears...

~Holding on by a thread, but it's coming undone.
Standing in a sea that's turning red; fighting a battle that can't be won...

~Reaching for a hand that's just not there; reaching out, but grabbing thin air.
I feel like dying, give me some slack, 'cause how far I've fallen, there's no turning back...

~Caught in a flood, my life's a mess.
Surrounded in blood, someone save me...

...S.O.S...
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Post by: Dunstan26 on December 15, 2011, 12:31:19 pm
....Amazing. That's all there is to it. Amazing.
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Post by: Ingredient on January 13, 2012, 12:31:13 pm
I loved it, its very good. I wish my poetry skills were just as good ;)
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Post by: Wolfish Grin on January 18, 2012, 01:44:58 am
Thanks guys! I appreciate the positive comments! ^^
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Post by: ponyHORSE61 on February 18, 2012, 11:41:08 pm
Nice job...not as good as mine, though...



(jk, jk, but srsly, look at my post: The Evil Cry + More! Lol)