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Title: (FOR SURA) A dog named Suragaha
Post by: duna the killer on April 12, 2013, 11:23:45 pm
This is for lord suragaha,a friend I met in Fluorite Plains...

Lead the way
O mighty service dog
Running to fulfill his mission even after his friends
Died in action

Streaming through shadows
Under water,above tree stumps
Running across the majestic plains
A service dog runs
Growling at all who attempt to stop him
Across the plains he runs,not ontop of a
Hill,but a clifftop he runs atop
And atop that cliff,a dog named Suragaha
Title: Re: (FOR SURA) A dog named Suragaha
Post by: LordSuragaha on April 12, 2013, 11:37:00 pm
That is such a beautiful little poem Dunastar. I'm speechless. I really don't know how to thank you for this. The image that built in my mind with such a few words... Simply fantastic. It's so lovely and sweet of you to write this for me. Thank you so much Dunastar. You're such a kind and thoughtful friend <3 I love this poem.
Title: Re: (FOR SURA) A dog named Suragaha
Post by: peachbreeze on April 14, 2013, 12:49:56 am
Lul, Sura enjoys it.