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FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: starthewolf445 on January 13, 2015, 06:39:18 pm

Title: Home
Post by: starthewolf445 on January 13, 2015, 06:39:18 pm
It's been so lonely since you all been gone.
I try to make new friends but they never stay for long
I wish that I could have gone with you
And have my life be renewed
For I look towards the day this all will end
And I'll be reunited with my long true friends.
The Pain will not subside
Until the moment I die.
Within my thoughts I reside
Growing colder with each year that passes by.
Am I ill with a disease called life?
These days are just getting so hard to pass by
And it's even harder when you're losing everyone in your life.
But I'm going to leave this place
Sooner each day.
It doesn't matter if I break.
I'll still be forgotten anyway.
I'm going to find my friends.
And together we'll be again.
I'm sick of being alone
With my mind being the only friend to call my ownx
I wanna find my friends.
And face the world with them hand in hand.
I want to be above.
And no longer be below.
I'll do whatever it takes.
To find my home.

(I wrote this for the friends I lost on FH and since they loved this game so much I decided to post it on here. I know they can't read it but maybe they loved the game so much maybe it followed them)
Title: Re: Home
Post by: Hooli on January 13, 2015, 10:36:53 pm
Aye, I can relate to this. I've lost many friends on FeralHeart. I love this poem, though! You've got talent.  ;)
Title: Re: Home
Post by: Whisperingwaves on January 14, 2015, 01:09:50 am
The beauty is beyond compare, all I can do is stop and stare~

I love it, and can very much relate to this. I've had friends whom have passed or left the game, in which I miss very much. It's good however, you could allow your mind some rest by writing.

~ Whisper
Title: Re: Home
Post by: Vask on January 14, 2015, 01:22:29 am
This poem is truly beautiful! It flows together so nicely and the emotion in it is really well projected.
I can definitely feel for this poem. You've got some real talent there, floof.
Personally I hope your old friends read this and can see what you're feeling.
Never stop writing poetry because that's some serious talent <3