Feral Heart
FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: magicfairy on May 30, 2015, 01:18:21 am
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Here is a little poem.. Based on my recent feelings..
EDIT: This poem is mainly based on my best friend that I've had for almost my whole life, we had such a bond..
[I'm Warning You]
We were best friends,
From start, but not to end.
We were best friends,
Until you pushed my tolerance off the edge.
I'm tired of your stupid blindness.
One day you'll see,
One day.
And I was warning you.
I hope you remember what I said,
Cause I swear,
It's time for me to go to bed.
And I was warning you.
Your stuck in their cage,
You've placed yourself there.
As your desperate cries sound the hall,
I'm not coming for you at all.
Remember that you left me to die,
Well I guess that's your choice now.
Because I've already moved ahead of you.
Just know, we're only friends.
Stop begging me to help,
For, I am not heading back anymore.
This is your mess,
And you have to fix it.
I did so much for you,
Now it's time for you to do something for me.
Your interest is way long due,
Now let's see how you'll like what's ahead of you.
Your broken now,
I was broken first.
But don't say,
I wasn't warning you.
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Nice poem, Spectrum. Many poems are about love, landscapes, death, and such things- It's interesting to read a poem about a broken friendship.
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I love your poem <3
A few years ago me and my best friend had a falling out and it crushed me, so I understand your pain.
But just keep your chin up and make some new friends :) If they hurt you, you should be friends with them
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Thanks guys! And the title messed up.. let me fix that. o.o I also needed to add a little more reasoning on the poem, so there is an edit on the top.
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Thanks guys! And the title messed up.. let me fix that. o.o I also needed to add a little more reasoning on the poem, so there is an edit on the top.
I think the title is fine! You are very good at expressing your feelings <3 +floof