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FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: Whisperingwaves on June 02, 2015, 06:26:23 pm

Title: Break my Soul...
Post by: Whisperingwaves on June 02, 2015, 06:26:23 pm

Hold me...break me..
your hands like the fire within my veins....
You can hurt me...phase me like your toy.
But you can't break me.
No, nothing can...
your hands are burning me..
No pain within my soul until now.
Break me..
Break my soul...
Kill me with your harsh life..


I needed to vent...please don't think i'm suicidal guys, this was something from within my heart. I couldn't hold it in...

Title: Re: Break my Soul...
Post by: shayy on June 02, 2015, 06:59:51 pm

Awww! This is so good Whisper. If you need anyone to vent to, I'm here for you <3
This reminds me of "Spirit", how his spirit, and inner soul hope (lol, soul hope?) are never broken. :)

Title: Re: Break my Soul...
Post by: Warriorstrike on June 06, 2015, 10:30:33 pm

No, no, venting is fine. I think your venting happens to be very artistic, and a great form of expression. Venting is one of the many ways of ridding the pain and expressing the inward emotion outwards.