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Title: Love Is Painful
Post by: hugrf2 on March 02, 2016, 04:23:24 am

Title: Re: Love Is Painful
Post by: Hakumi on March 02, 2016, 04:31:06 am

- Was Playing This In My Head -
This Is Deep. I Love It ~? Was literally painting a little image in my head.
- Le Nuzzles - If you ever do more, I can't wait to read it~!

Title: Re: Love Is Painful
Post by: hugrf2 on March 02, 2016, 05:07:04 am

Ahhh, thanks so much Hakumi <33

I do poems on my dA and stuff, but this is the first poem that rhymes like this. When I make more like it, perhaps I could post more like it on here. They're fun! :{o

Title: Re: Love Is Painful
Post by: Hakumi on March 02, 2016, 07:07:39 am

Oh ja they can be fun to do and nice for someone to to read ^^
I didn't know you did poems on DA. Whenever I get the chance, I'll be sure to give them a little look-see ~

Title: Re: Love Is Painful
Post by: G4RG0YLE on March 02, 2016, 07:21:47 am

This is actually a really powerful poem that hit me in the heart and made me want to read more, good job! I can't wait to see more of your works. <3

Title: Re: Love Is Painful
Post by: hugrf2 on March 02, 2016, 10:39:55 am

Eee, thanks again Hak! ;u; And yeah. The only one who reads my poem I think is my friend, so it's nice to see someone else has read it.

Shurtle, thank you so much. <33 I'm glad you feel that way toward it, ahh, if that makes sense! I'll be sure to post more poems I make in the future, as I mentioned~

Title: Re: Love Is Painful
Post by: Tessel. on March 02, 2016, 11:59:11 am

 I totally agree with Shurtle and Hakumi. This is super powerful and a beautiful poem. Never doubt yourself. I loved this, and I would definitely love to read more. <3 c:

Title: Re: Love Is Painful
Post by: hugrf2 on March 02, 2016, 12:37:44 pm

Quote from: Tessel on March 02, 2016, 11:59:11 am

 I totally agree with Shurtle and Hakumi. This is super powerful and a beautiful poem. Never doubt yourself. I loved this, and I would definitely love to read more. <3 c:

Eeee I must screech the thanking-ness again. Thanks, Tessel! ; o ; You guys have no idea how much I appreciate your comments ; u ;

Title: Re: Love Is Painful
Post by: Bullspit on May 23, 2016, 04:24:26 am

This poem is deep and incredible. It's amazing, love.

Title: Re: Love Is Painful
Post by: ArcticGalaxy on May 23, 2016, 04:44:27 am

This poem certainly tugs on the heartstrings a bit. Very nice job! ^^

Title: Re: Love Is Painful
Post by: Kynvuu on May 23, 2016, 10:21:39 am

Very beautiful poem Your writing is so pretty<3

Title: Re: Love Is Painful
Post by: hugrf2 on May 23, 2016, 05:15:10 pm

Ahhhhhhh! ;_; Thank you guys so much! I really appreciate it!