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Title: Electric Star
Post by: OutofBreath on May 24, 2017, 02:15:07 am
So, when I was around 3 or 4, my dad made his own version of that song, Twinkle Twinkle Little Star.
I honestly had no idea what it meant.


Twinkle, twinkle,
Electric star,
How I wonder what you are,
Up above the world so high,
Like an anode in the sky,
Birkeland currents wrap around,
Making electric humming sounds.
Title: Re: Electric Star
Post by: Azurain on May 24, 2017, 02:31:34 am
Why is this so amazing? I think I like this version better!!!
Title: Re: Electric Star
Post by: Astraea on May 24, 2017, 02:35:28 am
This is so amazing, fluff!
There is something about the language you use and the rythym that is just so captivating.

Keep up the great work <3 c: