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Re: Elements (next chapters here!)
« Reply #10 on: April 18, 2020, 02:03:47 pm »
Oh man, is she fighting them all alone???

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Re: Elements (next chapters here!)
« Reply #11 on: April 18, 2020, 02:06:37 pm »
No! She was escorted.
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« Reply #12 on: April 20, 2020, 06:27:46 pm »
Chapter 5
Garin threw himself at the wolf of the Water Clan. Julie joined him. The rest of the wolves in her pack began fighting with two wolves from the Wind Clan. However, they did not fight long - the opponents quickly retreated. Only the wolf from the Water Clan stayed and fought for a while. Suddenly the opponent hit Julie on the head. She staggered backwards. Garin, seeing it furiously, ran his claws on the back of the intruder. This one fell over. He gave up fighting and just lay panting heavily.
"What shall we do with him?" asked Julie.
"Let's kill him." one warrior said. "He betrayed eternal law, and he offended our Clan!"
"Maybe you'd better take him hostage?" Garin suggested.
"What is your name?" Julie turned to the intruder.
"Janama..." he wheezed.
"Let's take him. I'll talk to him later." said Julie.
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« Reply #13 on: April 21, 2020, 05:10:28 am »
Oooh tense.

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« Reply #14 on: April 21, 2020, 02:31:13 pm »
Chapter 6
Julie was walking back to the cave. Janama walked on his own, but sometimes he had to stop or lean on someone.
Finally they came. They stopped outside.
"Leave us alone" asked Julie.
The rest of her pack obediently moved away.
"Why did you enter our territory?" she began. "You know that you violated the eternal law, and offended the nations of Fire and Earth?"
"Devilish children are an insult? It is true." Janama growled ironically.
Julie felt a shiver of anger.
"You allow yourself too much!" she hissed. "This is not true. We are not the children of the devil, just as you are not angels."
"Yeah, right."
"Why did you come here?" she asked.
Janama calmed down.
"Well ... uh ..."
"Just tell the truth," Julie warned him.
"We ... we wanted to see what your territory looks like ..."
"I'm a leader and I know when someone is lying."
"You ... are you the leader?"
His face changed. And suddenly ... it just melted away.
Julie understood. It was the leader of the Water and Wind Nation!

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« Reply #15 on: April 22, 2020, 12:30:04 pm »

Chapter7
Julie decided to inform all the wolves about it.
"It was a trick. Janama wanted to meet the leader of this herd. And by the way he saw where our cave is." Julie was speaking.
"I said, you had to kill him right away!" shouted that brutal warrior - Hasel.
"It's betrayal!" screamed Garin.
"There will be war," whispered Dernial.
Julie didn't like the turn of the matter. War? The leader was judged for how many wars he waged (if any). If war breaks out now, the fact that the tribe will suffer unimaginable losses, then history mixes everything up and it turns out that it will cause war. However, the good of the pack was important,
"Let's wait one day. If you notice the intruders, there will be war," she only said, then turned and walked away. Dernial followed her.
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« Reply #16 on: April 22, 2020, 01:07:12 pm »
Oh man, war is gonna be interesting.

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« Reply #17 on: April 23, 2020, 11:03:42 am »
Chapter 8
Dernial was a rather scared wolf, so Julie was surprised to hear:
"I think we need to prepare for this war. What are you going to do?"
"I haven't thought about it yet ..." Julie muttered. "You must definitely take only strong, healthy and fairly young wolves to war."
"What if we lose?"
"Don't even think so! There is no such option. Elements are balance. If the forces are evenly distributed, there will be a tie."
"Let's hope nobody betrays us ..." he whispered.
"Do you suspect something? I didn't notice anything ..."
Suddenly there was a furious howl. Bad premonitions haunted them. They went out to see what happened.
"Intruders!" shouted Hasel.
She closed her eyes. Already? Really so fast? Why?
"Lead" she whispered to Hasel.
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« Reply #18 on: April 24, 2020, 10:42:00 am »
Chapter 9
Hasel set a fast pace. All uncertainty escaped Julie. She just wanted revenge. For cheating. For meanness. And for insulting. Suddenly Hasel stopped. He bared his teeth. He, just like the rest of the pack, noticed resting white wolves. They talked about something. Hasel was about to pounce on them, but Julie stopped him.
"Let's hear what they are talking about" she hissed.
Everyone blew their ears.
"It's all right. No reason to worry. If it goes on like this, these demons will give us back their territories by surrendering!" Janama laughed slyly. The rest of the wolves nodded slightly.
Julie was suprised. It is known that the wolves of the Water and Wind Nation are calm, but these here ... they were probably afraid of Jamana. Seeing that they didn't feel like conquering territories.
"They are not demons ..." a puppy muttered quietly.
"SILIENCE!" Janama shouted. The terrified puppy fled into the bushes.
Julie watched them for a moment. Then she turned to talk to her pack. However, she did not know that someone was behind them ...
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« Reply #19 on: April 27, 2020, 05:30:37 pm »
Chapter 10
Julie froze in terror. Behind the warriors stood the same puppy that Janama shouted at. She thought he was about to inform his packet, but he only approached them curiously.
"What are you doing here?" he asked in a whisper. "Do you know that you are on our territory? I mean ... I think."
Hasel was about to say something, but Julie stopped him.
"It just so happens that you're on ours. I don't want to be nosy, but why are you here?" she whispered.
"Well ..." the puppy became sad. "Janama said we were going hunting. I thought it was part of our territory that I don't know so well yet ... but the smells are actually different ..."
"Okay, so tell Janama that there is a volcano nearby that will explode, okay?"
"Okay."
"And you better not say we're here."
Julie watched the puppy return to the camp.
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