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Title: The Thousand-eyed Beast that stares into Heaven [WIP]
Post by: Vespian on March 30, 2014, 09:36:28 am

serious wip
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: Delija on March 30, 2014, 11:11:55 am
Holy crap Ves I love how well you describe him, nice job!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: liontamer1 on March 30, 2014, 11:27:47 am
This is amazing. 'Nuff said.

Do you consider Vespian your "fursona," or does he resemble you in any way?
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: Vespian on March 30, 2014, 11:40:38 am
Holy crap Ves I love how well you describe him, nice job!
I appreciate the compliment Deli-bird (I'm sorry, I totally didn't say that just to rub yer fur the wrong way, huehue). There will be even more information provided once I come across somethin' that's been looked over before I'm sure of it.

This is amazing. 'Nuff said.

Do you consider Vespian your "fursona," or does he resemble you in any way?
Aye, Vespian is my fursona and he resembles me in more ways than one. I wouldn't spend this much time and dedication to any of my other characters except him and I'd like for individuals to understand him and perceive him at his full potential. Thank ye' for readin'.~
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: Honest~Faith on March 30, 2014, 11:51:00 am
Impressing!
I just love the way you organized everything. cx
I think that your effort deserves a floof.
+floof.
I would love to see more from you.


Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: Vespian on March 30, 2014, 12:04:34 pm
Impressing!
I just love the way you organized everything. cx
I think that your effort deserves a floof.
+floof.
I would love to see more from you.
I am grateful for the floof Ms. It means a lot that ye' and the others have taken the time to read this. Much more that ye' find it satisfyin' and not that flawed. As Vespian's experiences expand, I'll be sure to provide said experiences here for any who'd like to read about em'.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: Delija on March 30, 2014, 12:16:29 pm
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: Honest~Faith on March 30, 2014, 12:28:54 pm
Impressing!
I just love the way you organized everything. cx
I think that your effort deserves a floof.
+floof.
I would love to see more from you.
I am grateful for the floof Ms. It means a lot that ye' and the others have taken the time to read this. Much more that ye' find it satisfyin' and not that flawed. As Vespian's experiences expand, I'll be sure to provide said experiences here for any who'd like to read about em'.
I would love to read more about your character "Vespian"
I must say, It gets quite interesting when Vespian is trying to find his sibling.
I'll stay tuned in for more. ^^
            
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: wolfdog01 on March 30, 2014, 04:32:04 pm
And so the story is reveled!
I love it!
I love the sort of dark feel to it and just everything! Amazing! :D
+floof!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: Vespian on March 30, 2014, 05:28:45 pm
And so the story is reveled!
I love it!
I love the sort of dark feel to it and just everything! Amazing! :D
+floof!
I'm pleased to hear ye' like what I've provided ye' Ms. Thyme. Thank ye' for readin' and I am grateful for the floof.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: hugrf2 on March 30, 2014, 06:16:10 pm
Vespian certainly sounds like quite an interesting character with lots of development, it seems. Even though this was probably in a previous roleplay, but still! I can't help but admire all that detailed writing, too. ;v;

Hurr, 'nuff of my so-called 'rambling'. x3 This really is a rather intriguing character, Ves, (oh you have the same name ouo) great job! +Floof
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: DuskPegasister on March 30, 2014, 06:26:15 pm
Can I just say that Vespian is truly a very interesting and creative character? I enjoyed reading through his life stages and learning about his past. I think the whole, "Puppeteer", thing is very cool and something I haven't seen before. Great job and wonderful character. X3 +floof 
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: Vespian on March 30, 2014, 06:43:17 pm
Vespian certainly sounds like quite an interesting character with lots of development, it seems. Even though this was probably in a previous roleplay, but still! I can't help but admire all that detailed writing, too. ;v;

Hurr, 'nuff of my so-called 'rambling'. x3 This really is a rather intriguing character, Ves, (oh you have the same name ouo) great job! +Floof
Aye, this is the guy I'm most commonly addressed by and recognized as. I'm pleased to hear ye' find him so interestin'!
I have had years literally to develop both he and The Puppeteer. If I'm not mistaken, I've had Vespian for over two years and The Puppeteer a little over three years (for when The Puppeteer was still alive, he used to be my fursona before Vespian). Even to this day, I'm still developin' the two in hopes of gainin' a better understandin' of my creations. Yer also correct with yer statement about some of the information happenin' in a role-play. The war between the Hilen and the Bizi packs, as well as Senka's death, did happen in a role-play I used to run called Galdu Arima. T'was a memorable experience that I won't soon forget (if I ever do).
I thank ye' for such kind compliments Ms. and I'm relieved to hear ye' had a pleasurable read.


Can I just say that Vespian is truly a very interesting and creative character? I enjoyed reading through his life stages and learning about his past. I think the whole, "Puppeteer", thing is very cool and something I haven't seen before. Great job and wonderful character. X3 +floof 
Ehheh, aye ye' can madam. Glad ye' liked the relation between Vespian and The Puppeteer. Every madman needs his demon, aye? Else he cannot laugh. Thank ye' for readin' about the two of em' and I greatly appreciate the floof.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: Bawfle on March 30, 2014, 08:17:38 pm
Oh my, this is the best character profile I've seen in weeks ;o I love the amount of dedication put into it, and the great detail withing the description ^^

I loved reading this! Has inspired me to make my own sometime! :3
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [The History and revision of Vespian.]
Post by: Vespian on March 30, 2014, 08:57:19 pm
Oh my, this is the best character profile I've seen in weeks ;o I love the amount of dedication put into it, and the great detail withing the description ^^

I loved reading this! Has inspired me to make my own sometime! :3
It didn't occur to me that this profile would come across someone as inspirational. This is quite a surprise and I'm psyched to hear that it has. I'll keep an eye out for yer own character profile if ye' decide to make one for I rather enjoy readin' about a particular character's history and learnin' what's shaped em' into who they are presently. I'm flattered by yer compliment Ms. Buffy and I greatly appreciate that ye' took the time to read through the content.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 4/19/2014]
Post by: Vespian on April 19, 2014, 07:55:40 pm
Minor Update

What's been added:

` Miscellaneous Tidbits
` A Frequently Asked Question
` Change of affiliation (since Cyniue decided to suddenly re-name herself as Thanatos)
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 4/19/2014]
Post by: Wolflover224 on April 21, 2014, 09:24:44 pm
There..... Are.... Just.... no..... Words....
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 4/19/2014]
Post by: Vespian on April 21, 2014, 09:40:17 pm
There..... Are.... Just.... no..... Words....
I hope no words = a good thing.
Thank ye' for readin'!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 4/19/2014]
Post by: wolfdog01 on April 21, 2014, 10:25:51 pm
Ohhh, I love the eyeballs bit. That's very interesting and different. Ouch though about the stitching of the mouth! >.< But eh, I guess you have to keep 'em quiet at some point...even if it is brutal...ow still...
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 4/19/2014]
Post by: Vespian on April 21, 2014, 10:53:52 pm
Ohhh, I love the eyeballs bit. That's very interesting and different. Ouch though about the stitching of the mouth! >.< But eh, I guess you have to keep 'em quiet at some point...even if it is brutal...ow still...
I'm pleased to hear ye' find Vespian's odd fascination of eyeballs so intriguin', ma'am. I figured I might as well add some additional creepy to his character thus voila.
As for the stitchin' bit, while it is painful, rarely does it happen too often. Since Vespian is a kind of "act first, think later" kind of fellow, his hot temper and verbal insults do get him in many quarrels. Then there's those few times where he bites off more than he can chew. In order to save both their hides- since if Vespian dies, The Puppeteer will no longer have a host therefore will perish soon after- The Puppeteer will involve itself and thoroughly stitch Vespian's mouth shut. In a way, it's the only technique the poltergeist can pull without makin' the scene suspicious.
Thank ye' very much for readin' the update. It is much appreciative!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 4/19/2014]
Post by: Morqque on April 21, 2014, 11:20:59 pm
Sexy. I have no other words. Lel
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 4/19/2014]
Post by: Vespian on April 22, 2014, 01:53:00 am
Sexy. I have no other words. Lel
Huehue. Thank ye', Ms. Zircon.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 4/19/2014]
Post by: Wolflover224 on April 22, 2014, 08:26:09 pm
There..... Are.... Just.... no..... Words....
I hope no words = a good thing.
Thank ye' for readin'!
It means a  good thing btw. It means so awesome, not even words can describe it. -Le makes up new word for awesome- aesjvehbjuuwo3rgbtjkhisnhtujugyf7setikuxdujg4vuget4dhrxbh! A new, unpronouncable, word.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 4/19/2014]
Post by: Vespian on April 22, 2014, 09:11:06 pm
There..... Are.... Just.... no..... Words....
I hope no words = a good thing.
Thank ye' for readin'!
It means a  good thing btw. It means so awesome, not even words can describe it. -Le makes up new word for awesome- aesjvehbjuuwo3rgbtjkhisnhtujugyf7setikuxdujg4vuget4dhrxbh! A new, unpronouncable, word.
Ahh, I see. Well then I'm rather pleased to hear of such!
New word. Let's put it in the dictionary.
It's rather flatterin' that ye' found my work so impressin'. I'm a bit speechless even. Again I will say, thank ye' very much for takin' the time to read this!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 5/12/2014]
Post by: SL138197 on May 15, 2014, 02:35:57 pm
This...This is the best freaking bio I have ever read of any character in the entire universe.  I literally felt like I was seeing him grow up, and the battle between him and his dad, killing Senka, you should become an author!

I felt sorry for Vespian before, now I just feel completely in awe and sorrow for the poor guy.  He's been through so much in his life.

+floof for such an amazing biography! -claps-
I shall save this to my favorites and print this out sometime so I can read it 1,000,000 times!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 5/12/2014]
Post by: Vespian on May 15, 2014, 06:28:29 pm
This...This is the best freaking bio I have ever read of any character in the entire universe.  I literally felt like I was seeing him grow up, and the battle between him and his dad, killing Senka, you should become an author!

I felt sorry for Vespian before, now I just feel completely in awe and sorrow for the poor guy.  He's been through so much in his life.

+floof for such an amazing biography! -claps-
I shall save this to my favorites and print this out sometime so I can read it 1,000,000 times!
Is Vespian's biography really that impressive, ma'am? I have to say that I didn't expect such compliments and kind words. It certainly lightened my mood. I thank ye' for that. I don't exactly see myself becomin' an author- I merely don't have the muse nor interest to do it- but I'm glad to hear someone thinks so. Even now, I still don't see the biography as great as ye' have proclaimed it to be. Perhaps it's just me. I s'pose now any who will read will know why Vespian acts the way he does and what has painted his flaws in greyscale colours.
Nevertheless, I'm very delighted to hear ye've found Vespian's backstory interestin' and thanks for the floof!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 5/12/2014]
Post by: Shenidan on May 16, 2014, 03:18:12 am
This is absolutely stunning! I love how you made his history and everything, Wow Vespian is my favourite among all of your characters, You did alot of effort there and that deserves a +floof!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 5/12/2014]
Post by: SL138197 on May 16, 2014, 03:26:32 am
What Shenidan says is SO true!  You put so much more work into Vespian and it has really paid off - in my opinion.  And it really shows, the stages of his life weren't too short to bore me and not to long that it just drags on for like...ever.  Well done!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 5/12/2014]
Post by: OreoHeroz on May 16, 2014, 03:36:48 am
Stunning. ;v; It is obvious you put a lot of effort in making this character bio, as Shenidan stated. I enjoyed reading this and how it was organized. -nuzzle- for what you did.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 5/12/2014]
Post by: Vespian on May 16, 2014, 09:03:44 am
This is absolutely stunning! I love how you made his history and everything, Wow Vespian is my favourite among all of your characters, You did alot of effort there and that deserves a +floof!
I have to agree with ye' there. Vespian is my favorite character as well and I'd probably not put this much dedication in with any of my other characters. I'm thoroughly pleased ye' enjoyed readin, Ms. Shenidan! Thanks for the floof as well.

What Shenidan says is SO true!  You put so much more work into Vespian and it has really paid off - in my opinion.  And it really shows, the stages of his life weren't too short to bore me and not to long that it just drags on for like...ever.  Well done!
Thank ye', madam River.~ It relieves me to hear the detail I've put into his background wasn't much of a bore or too vague. I appreciate the input.

Stunning. ;v; It is obvious you put a lot of effort in making this character bio, as Shenidan stated. I enjoyed reading this and how it was organized. -nuzzle- for what you did.
Thank ye' Ms. Oreo and for the floof!

It means a lot hearin' ye' guys' comments and takin' the time to read this.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 5/12/2014]
Post by: Kerriki on May 27, 2014, 02:44:37 am
I enjoyed reading this, Vespian ^^ I loved reading his past... so creative, I wouldn't have ever been able to think of something like that +Floof
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 5/12/2014]
Post by: Vespian on May 27, 2014, 03:03:36 am
Thank ye', Ms. Kiki. While it did take quite a while for me to build up his background and general historical experiences, I'm delighted to see ye' enjoyed readin' through it all. It relieves me to know my efforts were not put to waste.
Also, thank ye' dearly for the floof.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 5/12/2014]
Post by: TheApplePie on May 27, 2014, 08:32:45 am
Wow, amazing.
I always wanted to know Vespian's story..But I didn't know it would be that good!
The structure and perspective on his life are very creative yet dark, and I wouldn't want to meet him if I had a chance.
Awesome and impressive character bio, I enjoyed reading it!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 7/6/2014]
Post by: Shrines on July 07, 2014, 04:05:06 am
Beautiful as always, pal. kuekue.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 7/6/2014]
Post by: Vespian on July 07, 2014, 04:07:57 am
Don't worry, Teiv. I'll add ye' as soon as my muse to edit/rearrange things on this thread comes back.

Thank ye' for the comment though. This goes to Ms. Kiquaii too for such thoughtful words.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 7/6/2014]
Post by: wolfdog01 on July 07, 2014, 06:06:03 am
Yay! :D The update has came! X3
Glad to see he's kinda...not really...found someone I guess? lol And she looks pretty cool too ^^
Nice update Vesp! Still an awesome char as always!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil. [Minor Update: 7/6/2014]
Post by: SnappleApple on July 07, 2014, 10:37:11 pm
I Love how you you summed Vespian up in a nice way, helping a lot of us to understand him more.
I've always loved your character, and I, as well as a lot of the others out there, used to wonder what the mysterious creature known as "Vespian Soule Vahlok".

+floof for this, and the work we know you all put into this~
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil [Updated: 11/11/2014]
Post by: Vespian on November 11, 2014, 11:49:11 pm
Totally gonna bump this 'cause I just made Vespian x89 spookier (if ye' read the Appearance and one of the Frequently Asked Questions I've added in) 'n I re-worded a few things.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil [Updated: 11/11/2014]
Post by: Wyldercat on November 12, 2014, 01:40:53 am
*tiny scream* Oh mah gursh this is terrifying.
I love it. XD
Very well done, Vespian. Certainly a terrifying bio...
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil [Updated: 11/11/2014]
Post by: Vespian on November 12, 2014, 04:01:26 am
Thank ye', Ms. Nevica. That's what I was hopin' to aim for, huehue.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil [Updated: 11/11/2014]
Post by: Luna. on November 12, 2014, 12:59:16 pm
WOW  ;D 8) ;) :D -claps- Amazing bio Vespain! I love all the details and the story behind this amazing character! Well-done! I absolutely love this! I love how creative and throughout it is! So unique! It's a masterpiece. Amazing Vespain. Ahmazzin~

.:.Rava.:.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil [Updated: 11/11/2014]
Post by: Jackkdaw on November 12, 2014, 01:04:16 pm
mmmMMMmmm. Dat bio. *Slobbers all over topic*
So detailed!
I will never get over how interesting Vespian is as a character. Wow!
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil [Updated: 11/11/2014]
Post by: Vespian on November 12, 2014, 02:17:32 pm
Yeeeeeeeeeee', thanks a bunch guys!
Hearin'/readin' such feedback really can make even the most gloom smile.
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil [Updated: 11/11/2014]
Post by: CharlieTheBanana on November 22, 2014, 01:20:16 am
That. Was. Amazing.
To be honest,at first I looked at the pictures,read the quote blah blah blah but then I really looked at The Puppeteer,it looked amazing and quite creepy but still the thing was soooo long. After thinking about I decided to just skim through but when I read the first sentence it really intrigued me. So,in the end I read it all and really enjoyed the time and detail you clearly put in it. :3
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil [Updated: 12/6/2014]
Post by: Bluparrot on December 24, 2014, 07:23:51 pm
Apparently, Vespian likes eyes with white irises. Will he go for this character's eyes with black irises and white pupils?
(http://i58BannedImageSite/qzevrs.jpg)
Title: Re: The Mad-eyed Devil [Updated: 12/6/2014]
Post by: Vespian on December 24, 2014, 09:46:48 pm
That. Was. Amazing.
To be honest,at first I looked at the pictures,read the quote blah blah blah but then I really looked at The Puppeteer,it looked amazing and quite creepy but still the thing was soooo long. After thinking about I decided to just skim through but when I read the first sentence it really intrigued me. So,in the end I read it all and really enjoyed the time and detail you clearly put in it. :3
I'm glad ye' found his tale intriguin'. Me did mein best in makin' it not so dull, ehheh.
The Puppeteer is a sinister one. Just imagine havin' to be haunted by it/sometimes manipulated by it.


Apparently, Vespian likes eyes with white irises. Will he go for this character's eyes with black irises and white pupils?
(http://i58BannedImageSite/qzevrs.jpg)
Aye, he would. Vespian would go after that character's eyes.