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Help with the story
« on: May 06, 2017, 03:08:19 pm »
I lost this post twice :(

Ok, one more time.
I have written a series about sentient spaceships, and I'm a little outta names.

My idea of living spaceships started a year ago when I started to make a series of Spore adventures featuring living spaceships and a pilot that helps everyone. For months I had planned to make an animated series, but never did. Then I had the idea to write a story featuring the spaceships and their pilots. I've thought up most of the story, but I need names and personalities for the pilots.

The series will be named 'Legends within the Universe' Credit to Ellen11v for coming up with the name.

Captained spaceships:

Sparrow: He's a scout ship whom is happy to help. He may be a scout ship, but he doesn't do much scouting. Thunder does all of the exploring. Img: Captain: Gui. Captain's personality: Brave, helpful, cheeky, strong, daring.

Thunder: She's a scout ship who likes exploring the galaxy and reporting her findings. Img: Captain: Daxter Wilde. Captain's personality: Heroic, Chance-taking, Adventurous, Alluring, Strong, Big-dreamer.



You can help, just pick a spaceship, then pick one of your chars or just pick a name for the pilot, and write the personality of the char/name you picked. You may also write the planet that your pilot and spaceship come from, since the pilots are not a human but a human-like species. Spaceships you can pilot are listed below.


Petrel: He is the rescue ship whom is always ready to rescue a stranded spaceship. Img: He has the manager as a pilot for now

Bhaicer: He's a helper ship who likes to assist those who need help. Img: He has the manager as a pilot for now

Rohda: She's a freight ship who carries goods from planet to planet. Img: Needs pilot

Wasp: He's an enemy spaceship who battles with teeth and claw and no cannons. no spaceship approaches him without bravery. Img: Pilot:
Jeremy Wilde(For now)

If anything doesn't make sense just let me know.
« Last Edit: August 18, 2017, 01:24:31 pm by FlyingGrass »

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Re: Planning on writing a story
« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2017, 12:05:28 am »
(*Spore fan intensifies* I see you've made these creations from the game... Cool stuffz)

Name for the series: Legends within the Universe
Choice of spaceship: Thunder the scout ship, because she might get to put herself in the most interesting situations!
Name of the Pilot: (firstname:) Daxter (lastname:) Wilde
Personality of the pilot: Heroic, Chance-taking, Adventurous, Alluring, Strong, Big-dreamer.

Hope this is good :)
« Last Edit: May 07, 2017, 01:07:03 pm by Ellen11v »
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Re: Planning on writing a story
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2017, 10:48:25 am »
I like it! The name of the series will be 'Legends within the Universe'!  ;D

Daxter Wilde is now Thunder's pilot!

It is good!  :)

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Re: Planning on writing a story
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2017, 11:26:52 am »
spORE???? OMG YESSSS


This story seems very promising. I won't enter in it, but it seems really promising. You get... an nuzzle!! <3
Attempting to get more active. Enjoy the day!

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Re: Planning on writing a story
« Reply #4 on: May 07, 2017, 01:09:02 pm »
I'm glad you like my ideas! :)
I would love to read your stories :)
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Re: Planning on writing a story
« Reply #5 on: May 10, 2017, 01:58:52 am »
I'll just create the rest of the pilots if there aren't any more suggestions here. You may make more than one pilot, or even create a pilot for all the spaceships.

I'll be creating the series soon now.  :)
« Last Edit: May 15, 2017, 03:22:26 pm by FlyingGrass »

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