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FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Stories => Topic started by: Spring on April 12, 2011, 10:21:50 am

Title: The Kirja
Post by: Spring on April 12, 2011, 10:21:50 am

Title: Re: The Kirja
Post by: Spring on April 12, 2011, 10:28:15 am

>.< Ooops, I realised I posted this in the wrong place. Sorry. *facepalm*

Title: Re: The Kirja
Post by: wolfgirl56 on May 01, 2011, 03:07:37 pm

Nice story.

Title: Re: The Kirja
Post by: Tommyman on May 02, 2011, 10:26:21 am

Very well written, good detail. We don't know anything about the parents aside from the fact they had puppies. Try describing their coloring, other then that I have nothing else to say about it, but nice work. :)

Title: Re: The Kirja
Post by: Grypwolf on May 04, 2011, 12:08:15 pm

Good strat for great story :D What is funny thought is that your story name is "the kirja"

Kirja is finnish word and means "a book" :DD

Title: Re: The Kirja
Post by: Spring on May 04, 2011, 04:31:00 pm

Thank you for the nice comments! (:

I had heard about that >.< It's a pity I didn't know that until I'd got onto chapter 4, but oh well. :p Maybe I can add something about a book into my story!

Chapter too will be coming soon.