This was such a fun read! This is very well done and did not have to try hard to keep me entertained. The characteristics you attributed to each character (Gui’s techno-analysis talk, the villian’s obsession with prophetic rhymes and lengthy style of speech) made the comic natural and very tangible. I could genuinely see this as a kind of movie/tv episode, as it flows quite well and progressing through the story in a very flowing and rythmetic way. I can tell that there was a great deal of effort put into taking those screenshots (and perfecting the angles!) and editing them so as to create a beautiful piece of FH art. The effects and panels you chose reflect many of the comic books you would pick up in a store, and they varied to give the reader an enjoyable way to consume your story. Plenty of good humor and wit; I think I would stop by this thread again to read through it, just for fun.
I think my favorite character would have to be the little kitty buddy. All he wanted was some nommies.
Excellent work, Kuri. I’d love to see more from you. c:
