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Elements (next chapters here!)
« on: April 14, 2020, 09:48:43 pm »
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Once upon a time, at a time when the oldest wolves don't remember, two wolf tribes lived. First Light, second Darkness. They lived in harmony up to a point. The Dark tribe she-wolf and the Light tribe wolf fell in love. But tribal leaders found out and war broke out. A very bloody war. In the end, only leaders remained on the battlefield. They decided to bring to life the elements - Air and Water were to fight on the side of light, while Fire and Earth on the side of darkness. However, they did not intend to fight. They decided to live in harmony. Air and Water united as one tribe. Fire and Earth did the same. They have taken the form of wolves and have lived in them until now in Aella Land - the land of harmony and forest.
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Re: Elements
« Reply #1 on: April 15, 2020, 03:13:00 am »
This is super interesting!

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Re: Elements
« Reply #2 on: April 15, 2020, 09:58:29 am »
Thank you! Chapter 1 coming soon!
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Re: Elements
« Reply #3 on: April 15, 2020, 11:38:23 am »
Chapter 1
In Julie emotions were buzzing. The elders always told her that she would go far, but to be the leader of the pack of Fire and Earth?! She was happy, terrified, but above all surprised. After all, she has never been ... important. And all of a sudden, an owl living on an ancient tree on the borders of territories landed on her shoulder. It was unambiguous. Now she had to walk over the Lava River. This is a kind of attempt. It is believed that if the future ruler is a traitor, the bridge will collapse under him. He also believes in the transformation of future leaders. Apparently, they gain supernatural power over the elements from their pack. And now she'll find out if it's true - testing it herself.
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Re: Elements (next chapters here!)
« Reply #4 on: April 15, 2020, 03:07:58 pm »
Oh man, I wonder what's going to happen next.

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Re: Elements (next chapters here!)
« Reply #5 on: April 16, 2020, 10:29:37 am »
Me too! Story writes alone.
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« Reply #6 on: April 16, 2020, 02:26:44 pm »
Chapter 2
She stood in front of the bridge. The Lava River shone unnaturally strongly beneath it. The bridge itself was hardly what she had imagined. More like a footbridge. Still, it was terrifying. She set her paw gently. She looked at the bridge. It stretched for about half a kilometer. Besides, she had to come back. She looked at the river. She felt dizzy. She closed her eyes. She opened. She put her paw down again. And again. She walked across the bridge in small steps. After a while she looked back. But she didn't see the part of the bridge what she traveled there. Her fur color caught her attention. It was dark red before. It darkened now. Blood-red spots have become sharp. She also felt somehow... different. But she wasn't on the bridge now.
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Re: Elements (next chapters here!)
« Reply #7 on: April 16, 2020, 03:06:56 pm »
Oh no....the bridge went yeet.

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« Reply #8 on: April 17, 2020, 11:43:01 am »
Chapter 3
Darkness surrounded her. She saw nothing. She felt nothing. But she was fully aware. Suddenly she noticed a bonfire. A few rocks by the fire. She came over there. Or the fire came to her? Everything was strange here. Suddenly the rocks and fire merged. They turned into lava, which began to flow towards her. She wanted to escape, but lava surrounded her from all sides. Suddenly she was on dry land, the territory of Fire and Earth. She stood parallel to the river. Wolves from her pack were heading toward her.
"You did it!"shouted her friend Dernial.
"Yes, but I must take a nap now..." Julie yawned.
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« Reply #9 on: April 18, 2020, 01:17:18 pm »
Chapter 4
Julie woke up to a strange smell. It was dark around. She decided to investigate it. The trail led to the eastern border.
"It is the smell of a foreign clan!" she thought.
She decided to go back and inform the other wolves. Then, escorted by the strongest, she followed. The smell grew stronger.
She recognized three wolves: two from the Wind Clan and one from the Water Clan. The latter was the strongest. After a moment she saw them.
"What are you doing here?" she asked coldly.
"We ... ehm ... were looking ..."
Wolves were scared
"Have you been looking for animals?!" shouted Garin, the strongest of the pack.
"You shouldn't be here." added Julie.
"But we ... really ..."
"Get out of here!" Julie barked and bared her shiny teeth.
"Stay" growled the one from the Water Clan. "Devilish children
 will not command us!"
The fight began.
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