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Title: one Chaotic life- chap. 1 (this is a test to see if this is liked; read on)
Post by: Jaytsa on January 06, 2012, 10:27:40 pm

{ this is to see if the story about my wolf-demon, Chaotic, gets very far.comment below~}

*Zzzaap!* "Run the course, mutt!!"

Oh, I'll run, alright, I thought, I'll show that bully for a human how fast...! I ran long and hard along the course, jumping the hurdles, then my escape plan appeared as a box under a large vent in the roof came into view. Better yet, a hurdle was in the perfect position. I ran, and as the hurdle neared, I leaped to the box and into the vent at almost lightning speed, or atleast enought to dizzy me when i stopped. Then I looked around. The vent led outside! I gotta run now, before they catch-- A door slamed as my human appeared. --Up to me... I ran. What else could I do? At first, only grass passed by. Then trees, maple, I suppose. Then tons of pines swished by in an olive-green blur. I had thought that I'd lost the humans, until *Zzaap!*. Seeing a wide stream up ahead, I ran on, then jumped at the last second. Soon, I felt all the electric from being zapped coming back... I landed, but when I did, the ground flashed.

 "A fiesty she-wolf as always, eh?"
 I looked up, only to see my older littermate, Shade,  towering above me.

   ~To Be Continued...~

Title: Re: one Chaotic life- chap. 1 (this is a test to see if this is liked; read on)
Post by: Jaytsa on January 08, 2012, 02:46:54 am

So.... how's the chapter? Anyone?

Title: Re: one Chaotic life- chap. 1 (this is a test to see if this is liked; read on)
Post by: charmermew on January 13, 2012, 06:12:24 am

nice little story :D although I would've made the escape more prolonged ^^

Title: Re: one Chaotic life- chap. 1 (this is a test to see if this is liked; read on)
Post by: Jaytsa on January 16, 2012, 12:25:09 am

Quote from: Em&Em on January 13, 2012, 06:12:24 am

nice little story :D although I would've made the escape more prolonged ^^

Thx for the tip ;3

Title: Re: one Chaotic life- chap. 1 (this is a test to see if this is liked; read on)
Post by: charmermew on January 16, 2012, 10:41:12 am

No problem ^^ can you check out my story Seeing Red pwz ;D

Title: Re: one Chaotic life- chap. 1 (this is a test to see if this is liked; read on)
Post by: Jaytsa on January 16, 2012, 06:56:20 pm

Quote from: Em&Em on January 16, 2012, 10:41:12 am

No problem ^^ can you check out my story Seeing Red pwz ;D

I'll get to it soon~ ;3