FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: L0ner on February 19, 2012, 01:09:50 am
Title: My poems(so far only sad)
Post by: L0ner on February 19, 2012, 01:09:50 am
You said that you would stay, And everything will be ok, but then you whispered in my ear, something I did not want to hear, You said that you had to go, But all I said was no, Although I knew you had no choice, I couldn't explain through my voice, So I made this poem about you, For everything we used to do, For everything we did together, And I wish you could stay forever, But every book has an end, So I say "good bye" my best friend.
This poem is to a best friend, who is leaving to another country, I couldn't say good bye without crying, so I made this poem to tell him I will never forget him, and I will always think of him.
I loved you as a friend, or maybe even more? as you turned around the bend, I was this sad before, You turned and waved good bye, before you disappeared from sight, I really wanted to die, And not live through this fight, It was when my tears fell, That I new you were now gone, we knew eachother so well, ~to be continued~
Title: Re: My First Poem(sad)
Post by: Jayfeather55 on February 19, 2012, 01:34:48 am
It's beautiful :) I had to move away from my hometown over the summer between 6th and 7th grade. I know what it's like to feel like that :/ But, it's a very pretty poem <3
Title: Re: My First Poem(sad)
Post by: L0ner on February 20, 2012, 09:32:45 am
thank you, I'm sorry your friend had to leave too
Title: Re: My poems(so far only sad)
Post by: Ingredient on June 09, 2012, 03:46:52 am
I love the poem :D
I had to move from Australia to another country, leaving all my friends behind :( I miss them very much :'(