Feral Heart
FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Stories => Topic started by: TheSilentSpirit on June 16, 2012, 01:55:56 am
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(For those who wanna know, the story is called "ALONE")
It was late that night, and the Feral-Heart population was small. Fluorite plains, Bonfire Island, and South Pole were the only maps populated. Out of my curiosity, I walked into Ficho Tunnels, just to make sure nobody was in there. Not to my suprise, nobody was in there. I sighed, pressing down on the W key and heading down the hill and through the twisting tunnels of Ficho. When the map was empty, it was very peaceful; none of the usual wolf packs above the waterfall, no advertising, and none of the Pokemon RPers. The spot below the waterfall with all the plants and bushes was my favorite place to be.
I jumped as I entered the large room with the lake. There, out on the floating crystal, was a wolf. It's colors were all black, default size, with white eyes. The strangest thing was, it had no nametag or username. I went out of F3 mode, and back to my character, Minuet. I was positive I had nametags on, as I could see "Minuet" with "TheSilentSpirit" underneath. I had never heard anything about Feral-Heart being hacked, so it was surely not some guy with a hacked character. I grasped my shirt as the wolf looked torward my character. It's blinding full-white eyes I could see from this far away without it glitching in with the black. I was a little suprised when it hopped off the crystal and into the water. Although, it didn't swim like normal. It seemed to walk underwater. As it was pretty close, I could see it had the sad emote. I felt a little bad for it, although I was certain it wasn't a real character. Actually, by this point I was sure my game was glitching. It was probably someone new with a sad story to their character explaining the sad emote. Being the silly person I am, I f3'd the character again.
When I went out of f3 this time, my character was lying on it's side. It scared me to notice the black figure sitting with it's head looking down at the face of my feline. I was certain I NEVER pressed the action buttons. I tried moving my character, but she wouldn't get up from off her side no matter how many keys I pressed. Even the escape button on my keyboard wouldn't make the little screen pop up. Finnally, I was able to get up. I pressed E like a mad man, attempting to get to the Fluorite portal. I didn't even bother turning the camera to look back. When I reached the portal, a message popped up on my screen saying: "Map file could not be found." I knew that there was only one option now. I put my mouse over to the button that would normally have the "Home" panel in it. But, when I clicked it, the 3 panels didn't come up. Knowing there was now nothing I could do, I turned back. I jumped as the pure black wolf appeared right behind me. I would've heard the pawstep sound of a character running! A quick gasp escaped my throat as my laptop's screen went to a blue screen. It seemed that it crashed. That was acctually, suprisingly, a relief.
My laptop then restarted itself like normal. I knew Feral-Heart wouldn't be open when it fully started up. A little shaken, I went to refill my glass with water in the kitchen. When I returned, my computer was at the point where I needed to enter my password. After I took a gulp of water, I entered in my password calmly. But, when it welcomed me I jumped right out of my seat. My desktop background was... a howling wolf, purely black with it's eyes half-open and the blinding white showing. And this time, it wasn't sad... it looked angry. I didn't get on Feral-Heart for the rest of the night, deciding it'd be best if I got some sleep.
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I have to admit, this was pretty awesome. There are a couple of grammatical errors, and it kind of falls apart in places - but overall it's really good. Also! before the 1.07 patch or so, it was actually possible to have a nameless character; though your username would still show up. :3
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Yea, excuse my grammar. xD It fails in my head sometimes. :3 Also, I didn't want it to seem so real, so that would explain why it falls apart. Lolz.
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Great story, brah. When I read it my eyes were huge and my heart actually raced xD It freaked me out. Did it really happen? (Textes or calles moi~) But those weren't grammatical errors, they were spelling and some vocabulary errors. Not to offend or be a know-it-all, just sayin'. ;3
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Well, thanks. :3
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Very interesting story thing you have thar friend.
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Thank you all. xD And no Rami, it didn't happen. I would'nt be playing FH anymore if it did.
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Makes me shiver with fear :o
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THIS
IS
AWESOME
I seriously think this is quite a worth Creepypasta! Omg wonderful work, I got a little creeped out! This sort of reminded me of smiledog haha
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Awesome!! Couldnt take my eyes off!
Scary tho.. but totally breathtaking *-*
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I'm not a fan of creepypasta, but this is great!
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So scared.. So SO scared.. Um.. I wont go on a game tonight.. Just.. Look around the forum.. -SCREAMS RUNNING FOR EFFING LIFE!-
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Cant sleep after that! :( But it was good!
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o3o This actually gave me some chills... It's a very good story, nonetheless. :3
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THISISTOGOOD i luv! i told my best friend 'bout this and she wanted this screenshot for her computer screen! i made one... (i just remade black wolf with white eyes in ficho and sent her XD)
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Wow! Thank you everyone. ^^ I'm glad the fellow members of FH got a kick out of this. :3 Sorry for the late reply.
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Awesome! I liked it ^^