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FeralHeart Creations => Maps => FeralHeart Addons & Mods => Finished Maps => Topic started by: Minxy on October 04, 2012, 09:16:35 pm

Title: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: Minxy on October 04, 2012, 09:16:35 pm: Okay, so,this is my first /real/ map done and I wanted to know what you guys think of it. I would like comments on how to improve it and ways that maybe it can be the best it can be. I do plan to make another version, but with that, I need to know what's good and what needs improving on. The Territories shown are from Fire, Air, Water/Ice and Earth. So, here's the pictures and I would appreciate it if you would comment!:3 (Not sure if post goes here.)

(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_220404638.png) Water-fall in Air's terri.
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_220355181.png) More views of Air's.
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_220347167.png) Another.
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_214908820.png)
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_220306049.png) Water's land now.
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_215140204.png)
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_215133315.png)
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_215129558.png)
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_215119040.png)
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_214937480.png) Attempt of some Glaciers.
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_215049826.png) No mans land.
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_215041182.png) Earth's main den.
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_215034247.png)
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_215016185.png) Fire's land nows.
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_215002542.png)
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_214954480.png)
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_215009835.png)
(http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t498/MinxehMoo/screenshot_10042012_222853370.png) Water's main Den in the night time.

That's all the screenshots so far, tell me what you think. c:
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: CreamWolf on October 04, 2012, 10:41:01 pm: This.
Is.
WONDERFUL.

;a; I love it, and would enjoy derping in it.
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: Minxy on October 04, 2012, 10:45:17 pm: Aha, I'm glad you like!
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: XxInsaneAsylumxX on October 05, 2012, 03:15:35 am: I like it, its very creative and beautiful. It has two of my favorite things I love in maps: Waterfalls and floating islands. c:
I'd love to play in your map! :D
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: Minxy on October 05, 2012, 03:24:25 pm: Thank you! It's lovely to hear nice things about it.

We're planning on recruiting today, so if you're on and literate, we'd gladly take you in. c:
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: Phatom on October 05, 2012, 03:47:53 pm: My home looks AMAZINGGGGG.
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: Minxy on October 05, 2012, 03:51:09 pm: Aha! I'm glad you like it Court. c: Hopefully when I go to make V2, I can improve them all!
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: CloudFish on October 05, 2012, 04:41:07 pm: Looking good. Will be on for a while to help if still are having troubles with
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: WhysoSerious? on October 05, 2012, 04:46:27 pm: Good work Minx *clap clap*
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: Minxy on October 05, 2012, 04:47:53 pm: I'm glad you like eet. Thank you so much for the help yesterday! I bloody love yer for it, Cloudie~

Also, aha, thank you Jokerrrrr. c:
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: WhysoSerious? on October 05, 2012, 04:48:53 pm: Ya like the word 'aha' dont you Minx :} ?? heheheeee
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: Minxy on October 05, 2012, 04:50:34 pm: I do, actually. O_O It's like..a must do word for meh. xD
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: WhysoSerious? on October 06, 2012, 03:27:07 pm: Haha ! Oww Minx, Minx, Minx...I wanna hug you e3e
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: IcyBlizzard on October 06, 2012, 07:50:55 pm: Wow! That looks beautiful!
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: aviannerd on October 06, 2012, 08:10:38 pm: Hey, I was trying to join with my charector, Sprite, but I was being ignored. Any other way to join?
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: Minxy on October 06, 2012, 08:43:46 pm: THEN HUG ME.

And thank you. c:

I sincerely apologise for you being ignored! It was quite hectic. Just send me an Rp sample on here or whisper me in game. c:
Title: Re: Submentale Wars Map. (Wanting some Critique) ~Image heavy.~
Post by: aviannerd on October 07, 2012, 01:55:23 pm: Thanks. 'Sniffing the darkening air, Sprite quickly ran back to the den she had found. The fire-wolf was undure in the dark, a soft glow from her body worried her to no end. What if she was found? Sprite looked over her shoulders, not about to let anyone get the best of her. She ran to the human-place and curled on the warm embers they had left there.