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FeralHeart Roleplay => Characters => Topic started by: WolfLuna on October 06, 2012, 02:13:11 pm

Title: | Luna's Characters and Fursonas|
Post by: WolfLuna on October 06, 2012, 02:13:11 pm

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Title: Re: | Luna's Characters and Fursonas|
Post by: WolfLuna on October 06, 2012, 02:13:25 pm

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Name| Pinefur {Past~ Pinepaw, Pinekit}

Pelt Colors| Various Browns

Breed| Spotted Tabby

Kits| None

Mate| None

Gender| Female

  Pinefur was born into EchoClan, her mother she never knew though. As an apprentice, her mentor was destined to be Oakfall. When Pinekit was born, Oakfall had been Oakpaw. But now, she was honored to have him as a mentor. When all seemed well, Oakfall took on the responsibility of two apprentices, one was very jealous of Pinepaw and her close bond to the tom. Pinepaw insisted she was granted with a new mentor, the mentor was her close-apprentice friend Banehollow. As apprentices, they grew fond of each other. "Maybe, I could be your mentor when we get older!" Banepaw would always say, full of hope. Now that it was true, Pinepaw was happier than ever.

   A few moons later, Pinepaw was taught how to climb by a strange cat she'd met in the forest. After a while, the apprentice would sneek into Pinepaw's territory to see her. Pinepaw was granted the name Pinefur, as a warrior. The tom would still come to EchoClan camp though, which was not good. Hawktalon found out, and banished him from the land. Pinefur was very upset, but Banehollow was there at her side through the whole shabang. Pinefur has grown very fond of Banehollow.

Title: Re: | Luna's Characters and Fursonas|
Post by: WolfLuna on October 06, 2012, 02:13:33 pm

Reserved.

Title: Re: | Luna's Characters and Fursonas|
Post by: WolfLuna on October 06, 2012, 02:13:40 pm

Reserved.

Title: Re: | Luna's Characters and Fursonas|
Post by: WolfLuna on October 06, 2012, 02:13:53 pm

You can post now~

Title: Re: | Luna's Characters and Fursonas|
Post by: Larka13 on October 07, 2012, 05:01:42 am

Two words. Me gusta. -waits for updates- :3

Title: Re: | Luna's Characters and Fursonas|
Post by: Hunt on October 13, 2012, 07:30:42 am

Fantastic, I love how Pinefur looks, and the rest of your setup looks promising as well. This may just be me, since I love to write, but might I suggest giving your chars a bit more history on there? Even if it is RPed out history it is still a nice thing to have. Bacon for you ~ :)

Title: Re: | Luna's Characters and Fursonas|
Post by: InanisTesta on October 13, 2012, 03:28:15 pm

 Very nice. The layout is looking wonderful with it's nice golden letters o3o Your warrior character looks epic aswell, and I agree with -Hunt-. A lil'bit of history would be great c:

I'll be awaiting your updates c: +Nuzzle

Title: Re: | Luna's Characters and Fursonas|
Post by: WolfLuna on October 13, 2012, 03:47:45 pm

@ Caeruleus and Hunt~

I tried to write some history for you guys, and when I clicked post, -After half an hour of story writing- I crashed, and it all was deleted. :c. I will do it again, but it may take  a while. Thanks for the nuzzle and for the ideas about improvement!


~Luna