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Title: Story Chain
Post by: SteampunkWolfdog on October 15, 2012, 11:08:06 am
The Story Chain Game

Hiya, welcome to the Story Chain Game. This is where those authors out there can share your literary talents while thinking imaginatively on the spot.

Here's how it works
What happens is we collectively write a story by writing a paragraph each. In writing the next paragraph, you must follow on the story from the previous person's post. The story does not follow any particuluar pattern or story line and doesn't have to be completely serious; it can go in any direction and be as random, humourous, realistic or unrealistic as you please.

Rules
Gotta 'ave 'em, I'm afraid.
  • Be as descriptive and grammatically correct as you can.
  • Keep to the story's tense and mode of writing (i.e. third person, first person)
  • No explicit language, violence or smexual themes, please.
  • Any general conversation or comments should be writen in brackets and kept separate from your story paragraph.
  • One post per person per day; we'd like to let others have to chance to contribute.
Okay, I'll start with the first paragraph:

In a land undiscovered by Men, there lived a dragon. His name was Narhir. Narhir was a magnificent creature with glittering green scales like emeralds, knife-like teeth that shone like pearls, and firey yellow eyes. This dragon was extremely proud, and also rather vein; he delighted it watching how his scales sparkled in the sunlight and admired them in the mirror surface of the crystal clear lake. This became a regular habit for Narhir, until one day, something rather unusual happened.

Have fun!
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: YouheiSunohara24 on November 04, 2012, 11:42:09 pm
The dragon came across a blonde haired badass teenage boy wearing black leather, who was eating chocolate. The dragon came up to him and tried to take the chocolate, because it was one of his favorite foods. This was a bad idea on his part, for the human boy growled and took out a gun and repeatedly hit Narhir on the head, all the while screaming, "Die chocolate thief, DIE!". When Narhir backed away, the boy pursued him, screaming, "No one steals chocolate from Mello the awesome! For that you will pay! Bask in my awesomeness!"

(LOL. Have fun continuing that LOL)
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: wolfdog01 on November 05, 2012, 12:04:32 am
The viginlant dragon then reared up and felt sparks foam and slice his mouth. Narhir slamed down and let out a firey whip of death, it slashed the gun out of Mello's hand and then grabbed the human, only to raise it up to his eyes and stare directly into it's soul. Now sucking the soul out of this human, he droped the limp body on the ground and walked off as if nothing happened. Only to be confronted by yet another strange creature.

(Would this be considered violent or sadistic? However you spell it lol)
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: YouheiSunohara24 on November 05, 2012, 12:26:22 am
Then, Mello came back to life because of his sheer awesomness, and whacked the dragon with his gun of awesomness. Nahir turned and gawked, surprised, as Mello continued hitting him, yelling "Bad! Bad! Bad! I'm not supposed to die yet! IT'S NOT CANON!" Nahir stared at the human, confused, and began to walk away. Mello caught up, and, surprisingly, gave him a chocolate bar. "Here," he told the great dragon. "All ya had to do was ask." The dragon gawked and took the chocolate bar, and hit Mello on the head. Mello stared up at him. "Um. Fierce one, are ya?" he said in a cocky voice. "You look pretty badass."

(Lol... XD)
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: SoaringAway on November 05, 2012, 12:48:04 am
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: YouheiSunohara24 on November 05, 2012, 01:18:15 am
 Mello impatiently tapped his foot on the ground, wondering why it took so long for the dragon to eat the chocolate. "Why the hell do you take so long?! You've been eating that thing for thirty minutes!" he exclaimed. The dragon huffed at him. "I like to take my time," he growled. Mello sighed in exasperation, growling to himself. When the dragon FINALLY finished eating, Mello puled out his own chocolate bar, which disappeared in 6 seconds. Nahir's eye twitched. Mello laughed at the idiotic look on the dragon's face. "Heh. Weird lookin' face ya got there, dragon-guy. So, can I get your name?" he said, smirking. Nahir sighed. "Nahir," he replied.
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: teto kasane on November 05, 2012, 01:41:04 am
Mello was mad at the big green dragon. "What are you doing?" Mello asked the dragon. "Im knitting a scarf for my dying grandmother!" the dragon exclaimed. "Anyways, whats you name? Mines is Mello." Mello replied to the dragon. "Nahir," The dragon said.
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: teto kasane on November 05, 2012, 01:42:00 am
lol I messed up....
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: teto kasane on November 05, 2012, 01:53:55 am
The dragon was peacefully eating something while the man with the shining armor climbed up on the nearest rock near the dragon. "What are you eating, dragon?" the man with the shining armor asked the dragon. "A huge piece of chocolate my friend! Would you care for some?" The dragon smirked and continued eating. "No, I will wait for you to finish your chocolate and THEN, I will slay you." The man with shining armor said to the dragon. "Okay, but it will take a while.." The dragon replied.
                        "Are you finished yet?!?! Its been two and a half hours since you've been eating that piece of crap!" The man with the shining armor said. "I like to slowly taste the flavor of this delicously rich chocolate! im almost done anyways." The dragon said and finally finished in several minutes. "I can finally eat this piece chocolate! Ok here it comes!" The man with the shining armor said. He ate it in less than 2 seconds and brought out his mighty sword. "Any last words, dragon? Ah, I almost forgot to introduce myself. My name is Elias Holligsworth. Whats yours, dragon man?" The man with the shining armor sneered at the dragon.
                                               "Nahir, what a pleasure to meet you Elias."
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: YouheiSunohara24 on November 05, 2012, 02:32:36 am
(What the hell, Itzel? Didn't I already say that the man's name was MELLO and that he wore LEATHER, not armor? lol. Plus, I already POSTED the scene after what SoaringAway said. You just redid, when you are supposed to CONTINUE it. So, so this doesn't get confusing, and completely mess everything up, I am Re-posting my post!)
 Mello impatiently tapped his foot on the ground, wondering why it took so long for the dragon to eat the chocolate. "Why the hell do you take so long?! You've been eating that thing for thirty minutes!" he exclaimed. The dragon huffed at him. "I like to take my time," he growled. Mello sighed in exasperation, growling to himself. When the dragon FINALLY finished eating, Mello puled out his own chocolate bar, which disappeared in 6 seconds. Nahir's eye twitched. Mello laughed at the idiotic look on the dragon's face. "Heh. Weird lookin' face ya got there, dragon-guy. So, can I get your name?" he said, smirking. Nahir sighed. "Nahir," he replied.
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: YouheiSunohara24 on November 05, 2012, 02:34:55 am
((Plus.. you didn't even get Mello's personality right. LOL He is definately NOT one of those weirdo knights that want to slay dragons and are all weird and fairy-tale like. LOL))
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: SoaringAway on November 05, 2012, 03:13:02 am
[[@iMello: Easy, there sweet pea. Not everyone knows every character that well and read in the oriignal post "it can go in any direction and be as random, humorous, realistic or unrealistic as you please." But, you have the valid point of the continuity to the story.  However the rules clarify once post per day per person and there isn't need for harassment towards others.  A simple mistake is a simple mistake.
@Itzel: Please do edit your posts that way avoiding any clutter. I don't really know how the OP would react to many posts in general chat so I'll keep quiet now >u<;'. ]]
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: wolfdog01 on November 05, 2012, 11:42:49 pm
Good speech Soar :P)
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: YouheiSunohara24 on November 07, 2012, 01:11:17 pm
((Merp. I just was kinda ticked off that he completely changed the story. I mean, I clearly specified that the guy's name was Mello, and that he was kinda cocky and awesome... lol. And I also said that he wore LEATHER, not armor. LOL so... yeah. You're supposed to continue the story... not completely change it from the way the other posters made it. Anyway... Imma continue the story now.))
 
Mello stared up at Nahir. "Nahir?" he said. "Nice name ya got there." Nahir merely grunted in reply. Mello poked him on the shoulder. "So, anyways, my name's Mello," he said. Nahir glared at him. "I think that was obvious when you yelled, NO ONE STEALS CHOCOLATE FROM MELLO THE AWESOME!" the dragon growled. Mello sheepishly brought a hand to the back of his head anime-style. "Er... right.. heh.." he said awkwardly. Nahir continued glaring at him. Mello stared back at him. "So. Anyways... do you know how the hell I ended up here? One second I was sitting on a couch in my mafia hideout, and the next, I'm in a weird medieval world with a giant dragon who tries to steal my chocolate," he said. Nahir gave him the 'What the hell are you talking about?' face.

((LOL.))


Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: teto kasane on November 09, 2012, 02:33:10 am
Hey iMello I saw Mello and I thought it was supposed to be Meollo... lol sorry D:
Title: Re: Story Chain
Post by: YouheiSunohara24 on November 12, 2012, 10:56:01 pm
((Lol.))