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Title: The Harrowing Scream~::.
Post by: Firewhip123 on November 15, 2012, 02:12:32 am

Oh hold behold, one darkest morning
I withhold my hand, as I yearn for a later hour.
However I feel, a chill up my spine
as a feeling of flame
breaches my ears.
All that is there, is a long harrowing scream, I break to my knees, unsure of all
until, one fell minute later, I see the tallest figure before me.
A syth in hand, a cloak along flank, and all I hear is a harrowing scream.
Yet all I feel, is pain and fear, and suddenly, my mind is clear.
Yet again, my light fades, my eyes are no longer, yet the scream is still there.
A harrowing scream. c:

Title: Re: The Harrowing Scream~::.
Post by: Crin on November 15, 2012, 02:45:13 am

I like this piece. Free verse can be a tricky thing to do while still keeping rhythm and a good tone, but your word choice does as much quite well. I hope to see more of this kind of stuff from you, floof.

Title: Re: The Harrowing Scream~::.
Post by: Firewhip123 on November 17, 2012, 01:09:38 am

D'aww. Thankee c: