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Title: Thillex's Story Entry.
Post by: JackobLoveu on January 21, 2013, 07:52:56 pm
One morning, Jade woke up besides Riahn. She smiled and nuzzled him happily. She got up carefully not waking up her mate and also her pups, Misha,Storm, and Shadow. She crawled out the den, feeling the cold breeze against her skin. Like as if the winds was trying to make her fly. She gazed at her family and friends-whom was up. Then she spotted her mother, and who was talking with Thunder, Jade's father. She raised up her eyes and walked over to them, happily. Aria smiled when she saw her daughter coming. Thunder smile. He rushed over to his daughter, and licked her cheek.     "So..How are you feeling?" he asked. Jade smiled and answered. "Pretty good. Having pups..You know,.And dad please stop being mean to Riahn" She smiled, then she turning to her mother. "Hi Mom"
Jade! I'm super excited and proud to see you as a mother!
"[She smiled]Ya.."
Aria licked her daughter happily. Jade licked her back, and turned back to her father, waiting for a responds. Thunder signed. He nodded. Jade jumped on father and licked his father. "Ooh..Thank youmso much, Dad"
"Uh huh" he said, rolling the eyes. "Now get off of me" Jade got off of him, and left her parents alone. Jade walked back to her den, seeing her family still asleep, she smiled and went to cuddle with them. Riahn woke up, he glanced over at Jade, and the pups. "Hey Jade, how was your sleep?" he asked his mate, giving her a warm nuzzle.
Jade raised her head, and nuzzled back Riahn. "Ehh..Alright I guess" she smiled, looking down at her pups. Riahn smiled, and nuzzled her again. Misha tiny ears peaked when she heard noises, she opened her eyes, and yipped with joy. "Yay! It's mommy and daddy" she announced to her brothers, but her brothers was still sleeping. Misha whined and pinched them.

[To be continued! Credits to Caylis]
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Post by: whitesnow on January 21, 2013, 08:23:06 pm
I love that part! Happy family! <3 Floof for you! <3333
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Post by: JackobLoveu on January 21, 2013, 08:28:13 pm
Storm and Shadow whined in pain, and huddle with their mother. Mommy, Misha pinched us" they both said in the same time, then they turned around and both barked with excitement. Mommy! Daddy! Then they both jumped on their parents.Misha whined and didn't mean to pinched them, she cuddle by her mother's tail, sad. Storm and Shadow jumped on their's father. Jade straighten up to a sit position, and turned to her only girl pup. She removed her tail and starred at her pup. "Misha it's okay..You didn't mean too" she stated, and licked her cheek. Misha sniffed as she cried her mother fur. Mommy..Can I see grandma?" she asked sadly, crawling to the mouth of the den, waiting for an answered. Jade smiled. "Of course you can..I'll take you to her" and gently grabbed her pup by the neck, and travelled over to parent's den.At Aria's den, Aria was on the ground with head between her paws. Until she raised her head, when she saw daughter again, she tilted her head with confusion. "Yes Jade.."she asked in her softs voice. "Oh..Misha wanted to spend time with you" she answered. Aria got up, excitedly, wagging her tail. "Okay. Come inside Misha..Your grandfather inside." she smiled, lowing her head to the ground, facing Misha. Jade smiled and walked away, leaving them alone. Misha wagged her tail, and went inside. Aria straighten up and walked inside the den after Misha. She turned to Thunder. Honey..Misha is here. she smiled, putting Misha under her muzzle. Misha wagged her tail, and licked her grandmother's face, until she turned to her grandfather. "Hey..Can we play?" she asked. Thunder wagged his tail, he glad his granddaughter looked exactly like Jade, so he crouched low to ground, with a grin. Misha jumped on Thunder's head, biting him playfully. Thunder laughed, and rolled on his back, enjoying time with Misha.

[Thank you reading, second part :-) ]
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Post by: whitesnow on January 21, 2013, 08:31:57 pm
You should also write the part where Riahn dies and Hanso takes his place xD Good job again!
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Post by: JackobLoveu on January 21, 2013, 08:35:10 pm
Thanks..But that would be in the end. xD
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Post by: whitesnow on January 21, 2013, 08:36:09 pm
LOL! Oh yeah, I have a horrible memory XD
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Post by: JackobLoveu on January 21, 2013, 08:38:18 pm
XD Ya..
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Post by: JackobLoveu on January 22, 2013, 02:10:05 am
Shadow saw his mom left, he whined and crawled to the entrance of the den, and saw his mom walking, he barked with joy. "Mommy! Where's Misha?"he asked, gazing around. .Ooh! Can I go to grandma's place? Jade signed and nodded happily. "Let's go!" she said, turning around going back to her mother's den. Shadow barked with happiness and ran out den, leaving his mother behind. Jade giggled and ran behind her pup. Moments later, they reached, and barked for Aria's attention. Aria ears peaked and rushed outside seeing her pup and Shadow this time! Back again with another pup of yours? she smiled, licking her grandson. Shadow go inside your sister inside, playingshe stated with a smile.Shadow shook his head no. Aww can we play rag?he asked. Jade smiled, "Well have nice day" and left. Aria nodded and chased Shadow.
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As the day started to settle down, Aria returned the pups home, and gave each pup a lick on the head, and left. Jade cuddle with her pups, grooming there fur. Riahn was outside talking to Hanso about patrol with Zuri. Hanso heart beside into flames, but not actually flames..like a love signal. He rushed over to Zuri and sat besides her, romantically. Riahn smelled happily and went inside the den, enjoying time with his family. Minutes passed and the pups was deeply asleep
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The next morning, Shadow ran over to Hanso, and saw him shuggling with Zuri, he laughed, and climbed the tree. Shadow looked down and started falling. Hanso gasped and quickly grabbed him by the neck, and gently set him to the ground. Misha gasped and ran over to her brother.  "You okay?"she asked, as she nuzzled him. Shadow nodded and wagged his tail at Hanso. Hanso smiled. Riahn heard communication, and ran outside, wondering what was going on, until Shadow explained to his father what really happened. Riahn was proud of his favorite subject. Hanso glad to see that you love spending time with the pups..So I think you should be the pups baby-sitter and protecter.he announced. The three pups nodded as they wagged there tail. Hanso bowed down before his king. Yes Riahn. It would be my honor"he stated. Then straighten up. Riahn nodded and smiled.
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Post by: whitesnow on January 22, 2013, 11:05:18 am
*fangirls scream* Hanso! Floof for ya for such a wonderful piece! <3
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Post by: Blackbaron on January 22, 2013, 11:45:21 am
Very nice story Thrill :D Love the descriptiveness! Hope to see more!

~peanutninja
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Post by: whitesnow on January 22, 2013, 12:01:24 pm
Wrote new chapters for Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls :3
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Post by: JackobLoveu on January 22, 2013, 10:24:29 pm
Thanks everyone for the supporting comments :3

?Update?
Next Chapter tonight!
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Post by: JackobLoveu on January 23, 2013, 12:23:32 am
Thunder was looking at them from a distance, he snarled evilly, and walked away taking Aria to the forest. Aria wonder what was Thunder going to do, she shrugged and followed. Thunder was in front so Aria didn't see him reacting. He smiled evilly. He stopped and turned to Aria, he showed his fangs and dropped to ground, chocking her neck! Aria gasped, and tried to yelp for help, but it was to late, she died and her spirit flew towards the heavens. Thunder left her body, dealing it later. Then when he was about to leave his stomach growled, he growled and went to hunting. Hours passed, Thunder was walking back from his meal with blood on his muzzle. Hanso started wondered what happened to Aria all day, he gazed at Thunder mysteriously, and follwed him, by climbing into the trees. Thunder walked over to Aria dead body, circling around her. "Well..Well..Isn't it Aria..My beloved mate whom doesn't give me attention or any love! Just the pups" he exclaimed with rage at the dead body. He growled and got a sharp rock and stabbed it anywhere in her body, and blood flying into his face! Hanso watched and gasped when saw horror in his eyes! Thunder looked around, and dragged her body into the water so no one can see it. Hanso yowled and climbed down the tree, and walked up to Thunder with angry. Thunder gasped and backed away from the river, putting his tail between his leg.
"Why did you killed your own mate?!
"What! I would never killed my own beloved mate!" "Stop lying!
Thunder growled and surrender. "Muhaha! I actually did killed my own mate! Now get out of my way. he said, pushing his way rudely. Hanso growled and pushed Thunder to ground, clawing up his face. Thunder growled and
pushed him off with his hind  legs. Hanso yowled and fell to the ground.

[To be continued]
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Post by: whitesnow on January 27, 2013, 07:44:15 pm
MWUHAHAHAHAHA! HANSO VS. THUNDER! >:D I'm so sorry for being inactive, I had a stupid bill -.- I won't be on long, i'll be going on friday since i'm  still on the bill! >.<
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Post by: JackobLoveu on January 27, 2013, 07:47:11 pm
Caylis! -huggles- And thank you! And yes >.< The bill...
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Post by: whitesnow on January 27, 2013, 07:47:58 pm
OF DOOM!
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Post by: JackobLoveu on January 31, 2013, 03:00:45 am
Thunder put his paw on Hanso's throat almost trying to suffer him from breathing. Hanso yowled and used his hind legs, and kicked him. Riahn on other hand was beside Jade, and carefully watching his pups wondering from danger. Until his ears peaked, he eyes gazed at the forest, He growled and ran towards the sound of a yowl. Jade head turned when she saw her mate gone. Riahn saw Thunder and Hanso fighting. He ran towards Thunder, and pin down to the ground. "You better stop or you die" he growled as he pressed his paws on his muzzle. Thunder rolled his eyes, but didn't fought back. "I dont care he answered. Riahn snapped at Thunder's muzzle, almost breaking it. "What happened to the real Thunder?" There was a dead moment of silence, until Thunder finally answered. "Gone.."he replied in a spooky voice. Riahn ears went back, but instead growled. Thunder laid on the ground like nothing is happening. "Kill me..If you want!he demanded. Riahn growled, and unleashed his claws, and pressed down onto Thunder. Thunder die. Riahn took a step back, and panted. Hanso patted Riahn, and walked back to the camp. Riahn followed, and went made an announcement. "Aria and Thunder or die!" Jade gasped as tears ran down from her cheek. How can this be? How could this happened! Riahn walked up to his mate and nuzzled her, feeling bad for her mother, mostly. Jade continued crying as she nuzzled back her mate. Misha whom was starring at her pup, frowned and nuzzled her parents.  

[To be continued]
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Post by: whitesnow on February 01, 2013, 08:25:00 pm
WHOO! :D Loving it! <3 Floof!
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Post by: JackobLoveu on February 01, 2013, 08:27:46 pm
Hehe thanks!
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Post by: whitesnow on February 01, 2013, 08:52:25 pm
Welcome :3