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Game & Forum Discussion => Game Discussion => Topic started by: FantasyFeather on April 23, 2013, 08:20:22 pm

Title: Witch is this Lit or Semi-Lit?
Post by: FantasyFeather on April 23, 2013, 08:20:22 pm

Am Kinda wanting to know if am Really Lit or Semi-Lit Because am confused my friends say I am Lit then the Other Says am Semi-Lit, Okay i'll Give you a Sample.   *The Young Saber Tooth Sat in Boredness, She Flicked her Tail Twice and Licked her Fangs Once. She Suddenly narrowed her eyes as a Buck Deer Trotted past, She Crouched Down her Heart Rate Getting faster as she got ready to Pounce Her Bushy Tail Flicked Five Times Before She Pounced.* Am Kinda Tired Because of my Exams today I've Got them for Two Weeks D:  Please say Witch I am.  :) Thank you for Reading this.

Title: Re: Witch is this Lit or Semi-Lit?
Post by: Slydragon99 on April 23, 2013, 08:26:11 pm

I would say that you are literate, the only issue is you have some capitals mid-sentance, and one or two grammar things (Not to be picky), but overall you are quite literate.

Title: Re: Witch is this Lit or Semi-Lit?
Post by: FantasyFeather on April 23, 2013, 09:19:45 pm

Thank you, Am actually quite tied three exams in one day! I can't believe am surviving it xD Well thank you again, i :-[ don't know why but i like putting Capitals where they not needed.

Title: Re: Witch is this Lit or Semi-Lit?
Post by: Lady_Alizarin on April 23, 2013, 09:23:21 pm

Seems pretty literate to me. Slydragon is right about the capitals thing, but other than that... I say you are on the literate side.

Title: Re: Witch is this Lit or Semi-Lit?
Post by: Silvertide on April 23, 2013, 09:48:14 pm

Yup, I agree as well.

Title: Re: Witch is this Lit or Semi-Lit?
Post by: MadMoai on April 23, 2013, 10:30:23 pm

I'd say it's pretty close to literate. :D I'm a big grammar picky-person but you'd probably get annoyed at me if I pointed out every tiny little error I saw on every post... I'm not the best judge so I'd say you're sort of three quarters in between semi-literate and literate, if that makes any sense. It's better than I can do when I'm tired |D

Title: Re: Witch is this Lit or Semi-Lit?
Post by: BouncyLion101 on April 23, 2013, 11:19:40 pm

I have to say you're a cross between semi-literate and literate. It's just the capitols being in the incorrect places and your post isn't that detailed, but with some practice you'll be a very literate roleplayer. c:

I'm sure the exams are tough on you though, so take it easy and don't worry too much about your roleplay stay. :3

Title: Re: Witch is this Lit or Semi-Lit?
Post by: wolvesaregreat on April 24, 2013, 01:40:21 pm

I think you're literate enough, maybe you should write a bit longer in RP? Still, I can see your literate side even if you had some mistakes. So I think you can join any literate groups! ^.^
By the way, once when I was browsing on internet for Aro' kai (was bored, also, even if I ever start to play it when it comes out I WILL visit FH BD) and saw something like grammar things and such, for practicing and role playing. Maybe FH should have that on forums too? o.o After all, there are some newbies that probably want to practice! o3o
~LittleWolf~