FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Stories => Topic started by: Loccora on July 18, 2013, 09:02:00 pm
Title: The Forbidden Lands Chapter 1: The Tunnels
Post by: Loccora on July 18, 2013, 09:02:00 pm
"Who's this?" Snarled a black female with white streaks.
"It's okay, Rockquel. She's a..... friend, should I say." Eli replied.
Rockquel sneered and turned away. Meg could hardly believe how big the tunnels were in the middle. She didn't look
at anyone. Meg stayed silent and held her breath. It smelled musky and rotted. Like a bunch of dead, decaying, wolves.
The smell burned her nostrils. Who died and what did they do with the body? Meg wondered. The smell of rotting flesh
drowned out the smell of the hundred-year-old tunnels. They were filled with many battle-scarred wolves. All the wolves
scurried in and out of several tunnels that separated them. Meg was exhausted. All the walking. Her tail was still
bleeding.
Calm down. She told herself. You'll bleed out at this rate. She heard
sniffing at her bleeding tail and whipped around to see a small dark brown wolf. "I'm Hayden. Sorry to be so nosy."
He said and Meg shrugged. "With a wound like that, I'm surprised you're not already dead." He glanced at Eli as if he
knew Eli did that.
Hayden was right. Meg was starting to feel too weak to stand. She collapsed to
her knees. "Meg!" Eli gasped, rushing toward her.
Hayden stepped in front of him. "You've done enough, Eli." He snarled, glancing at Meg, who was on her side trying
to stay alive with the little air she could breathe in with the heat.
Hayden walked over to her and tapped her muzzle with his. Meg's last thoughts were Hayden.
Title: Re: The Forbidden Lands Chapter 1: The Tunnels
Post by: Ex0rcist on July 18, 2013, 09:37:23 pm
'Tis a wonderful story so far. I like the developing plot, and I'm eager to read future chapters. Keep up the good work, I'm curious what might happen next.
Title: Re: The Forbidden Lands Chapter 1: The Tunnels
Post by: Vespian on July 19, 2013, 08:02:48 am
An interesting story. I wonder if Meg will make it or die. Hopefully I'll get to read more chapters from you.
Title: Re: The Forbidden Lands Chapter 1: The Tunnels
Post by: Loccora on July 19, 2013, 03:19:36 pm
Wow..... Thank you all! And yes, you WILL see plenty more chapters;)