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Title: Spot the mistake!
Post by: Star12 on August 17, 2013, 10:23:02 am
So, this game is basically what the title says. All you have to do is write a short paragraph about anything but also include one clearly deliberate mistake. The next person will have to point out the mistake! So, here is an example:

The cat walked up to the fenssss.

Did you see it there? Well, it would be more fun if it was a bit longer that that, just to make it harder for people! And, the person that created the hardest mistake will be the winner! I will decide the winner every month or so, but sadly there won't be any prizes.
I'm not gonna start, just coz mine will probably be too easy and I'm too lazy to do it anyway xD.

Good luck!
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: Senrova on August 17, 2013, 11:43:50 am
Heres mine:

Heyo floofies! I'm EpicWolfie! You know i have lots of fun on this forum. Its really nice to meet new peeps around here. I also enjoy playing the game. Its really satisfying to roleplay. I like it. Yeah.



The end.



EpicWolfie over and out to the howl...
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: kiaz1st on August 17, 2013, 11:49:10 am
Is it that the 'i' wasn't capitalized?

Spot the the mistake:
12345678910
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: Star12 on August 17, 2013, 11:57:34 am
You said 'the' twice!

I used to have a cat called Chiko, he was a black and white cat and lived with us for fourteen years! But then, we moved house and let our next door neighbours have Cheeko, we now have a kitten named Suzie and a ginea pig named Bobbie.
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: kiaz1st on August 17, 2013, 12:00:08 pm
You spelt the cats name 'Chiko' the first time, then 'Cheeko' the second!

I have five dogs, Ben, Angle, Moose and Scruffs.
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: Senrova on August 17, 2013, 12:11:20 pm
Quote from: Kiaz on August 17, 2013, 11:49:10 am
Is it that the 'i' wasn't capitalized?

Spot the the mistake:
12345678910

Yeah it was the i.
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 17, 2013, 12:39:59 pm
Quote from: Kiaz on August 17, 2013, 12:00:08 pm
You spelt the cats name 'Chiko' the first time, then 'Cheeko' the second!

I have five dogs, Ben, Angle, Moose and Scruffs.

You only put four names.

Dunno if jokes work...

One day, there was a cowboy riding his horse when he spotted a bar up ahead, and so he tied up his horse in the stables and walked into the bar. After getting a drink, he went back outside to mount his horse again when he realized it was missing. Angry, he stormed into the bar and took out his gun and fired it into the air to get everyone's attention. "Okay," he said when everyone had looked his way. "My horse is missing! If I don't get it back after I drink three (changing) Dr. Peppers, I'm going to have to do something that I would never want to do." And so after the cowbay drank three sodas, he went back out to find his horse. After seeing it there, he mounted it and began to head back to his ranch when the bar owner ran out to stop him. "What were you going to do if you didn't get your horse back?" At that question, the cowboy stopped and stared at the bar owner, before replying, "I would have to walk home."
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: zRichtofen on August 17, 2013, 12:49:37 pm
Chupacabra, Jersey Devil, Darmoor, Mothmn, Bigfoot, Yeti, Yowie, Flatwoods Mnster, Sheepsthc, Gtmn, Lochness Monster, Lou Ga Rou, Skin Walker, Lake Demon, Lake Man

Multiple in this one.

And above.... I don't know. Its a long story?
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 17, 2013, 12:56:22 pm
Shall I give you the answer? Maybe I did make it too long...that was unexpected.

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And so after the cowbay drank three sodas, he went back out to find his horse.

Now can you spot it?

Quote from: codacc on August 17, 2013, 12:49:37 pm
Chupacabra, Jersey Devil, Darmoor, Mothmn, Bigfoot, Yeti, Yowie, Flatwoods Mnster, Sheepsthc, Gtmn, Lochness Monster, Lou Ga Rou, Skin Walker, Lake Demon, Lake Man

I have no idea what these mythical creatures are, but I'm guessing you spelled "Monster" wrong? (Flatwoods Mnster).
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: emana00834 on August 17, 2013, 01:30:10 pm
Heres mine:
Hello guys my names Emman and I am from Europe in a small country named Bosnia and Hercegovina and it's a very special country for me :)

And im not making this thing up its true that im from Bosnia
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: wolfsquad on August 17, 2013, 01:55:19 pm
Quote from: eman on August 17, 2013, 01:30:10 pm
Heres mine:
Hello guys my names Emman and I am from Europe in a small country named Bosnia and Hercegovina and it's a very special country for me :)
And im not making this thing up its true that im from Bosnia
You added two M's instead of one? IDK
Here is mine: 'The wolf walked into the cave, dropping down into a pile of deed flowers. After an hour, the wolf got up and left the cave.' (Yea, It's an rp sample.)
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: emana00834 on August 17, 2013, 02:00:24 pm
You will never guess nad u spelled deed instead of dead and if the next two guesses fail i win and no its not the 2 M's
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 17, 2013, 02:05:40 pm
Quote from: eman on August 17, 2013, 01:30:10 pm
Heres mine:
Hello guys my names Emman and I am from Europe in a small country named Bosnia and Hercegovina and it's a very special country for me :)

And im not making this thing up its true that im from Bosnia

You spelled "Hercegovina" wrong.

---

"Oh..." Risto murmured, relief spilling over him as he recognized Teegan's face. She seemed a little exasparated, and some prey was clamped in her jaws. Feeling sorry for her, he bounded up to her, his pelt drenched from the rain. "You need any help?" he asked her, raising his voice over the pouring rain.

((Posted by me; taken out from an RP.))
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: emana00834 on August 17, 2013, 03:29:11 pm
No that how its selle. 1 more failed guess and i win.
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: Senrova on August 17, 2013, 03:32:03 pm
Quote from: eman on August 17, 2013, 01:30:10 pm
Heres mine:
Hello guys my names Emman and I am from Europe in a small country named Bosnia and Hercegovina and it's a very special country for me :)

And im not making this thing up its true that im from Bosnia

U 4got thee full stop! Yes? No?
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: Vespian on August 17, 2013, 04:16:34 pm
Quote from: eman on August 17, 2013, 01:30:10 pm
Heres mine:
Hello guys my names Emman and I am from Europe in a small country named Bosnia and Hercegovina and it's a very special country for me :)

And im not making this thing up its true that im from Bosnia

Hurr.

1. You used wrong punctuation with the I'm. It's I'm, not im.
2. You forgot your periods after each sentence.
3. Need a comma after 'Hello guys' and 'this thing up'.
4. I do believe you spell its as it's (since you're referring to it is).

All that I can spot, via punctuation errors.
Also:

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I will decide the winner every month or so, but sadly there won't be any prizes.

DarkPetal assigns who the winner is so please do not immediately declare yourself as the winner of this game. Besides, this is a game so it's just for fun.

As for me, I suppose I should put something in now.

Slowly it waded through the decay, what was left of the once flourishing wood. Trees stood stooped, curling their gnarled, broken arms around their naked bodies in shame, leaves lay molded together on the floor, the water stood still-careful as to not disturb the iron curtain that shadowed the wood. A sharp snap of underbrush brok the silence that it savored more than flesh.


"You'll loose your way, soldier, just as many have. You'll loose your way and I will find you. I will peel your flesh away from its harbor. I'll take your eyes and replenish my lost sight. You will cry out for aid, scratch at my body like a screaming child begging for mother's milk, and drown in your own vitals. I'll leave your tattered body at the edge of this cursed forest of dead things for all to see. Warn them so I may die, as I've prayed for so many years."
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 17, 2013, 04:51:40 pm
Hey, Vespian. I haven't seen you in a while. :3

"A sharp snap of underbrush brok the silence that it savored more than flesh."

You spelled "broke" wrong. 

Quote from: OreoHeroz on August 17, 2013, 02:05:40 pm
"Oh..." Risto murmured, relief spilling over him as he recognized Teegan's face. She seemed a little exasparated, and some prey was clamped in her jaws. Feeling sorry for her, he bounded up to her, his pelt drenched from the rain. "You need any help?" he asked her, raising his voice over the pouring rain.

Nobody answered this one yet...
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: Vespian on August 17, 2013, 05:12:05 pm
Yes, it has been a while. Tis' good to see you again but alas, after this post I must roll off. Such bad timing, hopefully I can speak more to you on a later date perhaps? Take care of yourself floof.

Ah, ye' caught me. However, seeing as nobody replied to your post, I'll do it gladly.

You spelled exasperated wrong.

Slowly, the encroaching obscurity would blind those that have sinned. Engraveing it's vile sense of fear across the expressions of the dead. Defeated, the carrion would fall. Traversing into another realm of melancholy yet bittersweet solitude. There, they would be banished for all to see. Only to be remembered by the words on their tombstones and the memories of those who have repented.
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 17, 2013, 06:01:04 pm
I look forward to that. x3 Take care as well.

"Engraveing it's vile sense of fear across the expressions of the dead."

You spelled "engraving" wrong.

Let's learn more about knots.
 
What is a knot? The tangles in your shoelaces? The knot you find in a wooden plank? The inticate knots that sailors tie to secure ropes and rigging? No, the knot I'm talking about has to do with speed. (And I'm too lazy to finish it.)
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: Ex0rcist on August 17, 2013, 06:30:39 pm
"The inticate knots that sailors tie to secure ropes and rigging?"

You have spelled "intricate" incorrectly.

That's all the mistakes I can find.

The black mist tapered within the sweet aura of silence, seeping into the shrouds engulfing the yet serene terrains. Upon itself, engraved a dark note that may only be deciphered by one whose mind is as black as death, immensely flamed tongue ruthlessly lashing out at the rims of the light. A sick thought beholdeth, prowling in the darkness to which only our imaginations can disclose its true sickly and twisted exterior... It is something we cannot escope, death itself...
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: hugrf2 on August 17, 2013, 06:36:40 pm
You misspelled "escape" with "escope". (Literally all I know is misspelled...)

"There is no where to run or hide... it's just there, always there to creep up on you like that. It almost controls your brain and your actiens. But what is it, I used to think. It curses you, like the soulless raven it came from..."
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 17, 2013, 06:46:31 pm
You spelled "actions" wrong.

"Can you image what Thankgiving would be without turkey? As native to the Unites States as the holiday itself, turkeys have wandered the Americas for ten million years."

Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: hugrf2 on August 17, 2013, 06:51:50 pm
You added an extra "S" to America. :3

"Why do I have to go through so many lines of this story? Is it just a story or something else?
Maybe we don't need to study our home, there's already enough to study out there where stars take their places.
But what about those strange bleck holes? Are there white holes even, too? What about other strange formations of life or gases?
Maybe we'll never know... The galaxy and universe is just so big."
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 17, 2013, 06:58:17 pm
Ahh, no. I spelled "Thanksgiving" wrong. xD

"But what about those strange bleck holes?"

You spelled "black" wrong. Just a random question, was this taken out of a story?

Wild or domesticated, the turkey was so important in the early days of the United States that Ben Franklin wanted to make it the official United States bird. When the bald eagle was chosen instead, he said, "I wish the bald eagle had not been chosen...He is a bird of bad moral character...The turkey is much more respecteble bird and withal a true original native of America."
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: emana00834 on August 17, 2013, 07:07:16 pm
You all failed and i win. XD i forgot the ( &) when i said that this was true. YAAAAY I WON.
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: hugrf2 on August 17, 2013, 08:23:47 pm
Eman, there is no winning. This is just for fun. :/

Also, no, it wasn't taken out of a story. I just imagine one of my characters describing these sentences. Such as Havor describing the first line I made, and Rezcu describing the second line.
Meep. I think you also misspelled "Respectable" too.

"I am not the monster, you are. You chose this path, and now I give you this curse you will suffer... I am sorry you chose thiz path."

(Short quote is short)
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: kiaz1st on August 17, 2013, 08:27:19 pm
Quote from: eman on August 17, 2013, 07:07:16 pm
You all failed and i win. XD i forgot the ( &) when i said that this was true. YAAAAY I WON.
Urrrr....you can't win. This is a game, not a contest.....


You miss spelt 'This'.

I never thought I would fall in love with someone. But I did. I fall in love with him. He's the only one for me.
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 17, 2013, 08:34:30 pm
Quote from: Kiaz on August 17, 2013, 08:27:19 pm
I never thought I would fall in love with someone. But I did. I fall in love with him. He's the only one for me.

You put "fall" instead of "fell".

"Think your school exams are tough? Hate those pop quizzes? Just imagine what scholars in ancient China had to go through if they hoped to reach the high position of "mandaren," an officer of the vast Chinese empire."




Quote from: Hugrf on August 17, 2013, 08:23:47 pm
Also, no, it wasn't taken out of a story. I just imagine one of my characters describing these sentences. Such as Havor describing the first line I made, and Rezcu describing the second line.
Meep. I think you also misspelled "Respectable" too.

Oh, okay. But well written anyway, floof. And yes, I spelled "respectable" wrong.
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: zRichtofen on August 17, 2013, 10:39:59 pm
Ignore this post, it was glitched .-.


Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: Star12 on August 18, 2013, 09:12:57 am
Quote from: eman on August 17, 2013, 07:07:16 pm
You all failed and i win. XD i forgot the ( &) when i said that this was true. YAAAAY I WON.
I'm sorry to say, eman, but you did not win. I'm going to choose a winner every month or so that has made the most detailed and hardest to spot mistake. I'm sorry but yours wasn't the most detailed. From now on, I ask you to leave the winning up to me, okay?  

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"Think your school exams are tough? Hate those pop quizzes? Just imagine what scholars in ancient China had to go through if they hoped to reach the high position of "mandaren," an officer of the vast Chinese empire."
You spelt mandaren wrong? Isn't it spelt mandarin? *shrugs*

There once was a boy named Harry,
He was born to be a star.
His parents were killed by Voldamort,
Who gave him a lightning scar!
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: emana00834 on August 18, 2013, 10:55:16 am
Kay but i didnt even  cared abou winning. I just wanted to have fun when i dont have a comp to play at my vaicaition
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: kiaz1st on August 18, 2013, 10:59:40 am
You misspelt Voldemort?

You see, to become me, you must understand me, and to understand me, you must become me, which would be impossible, so you shall neether be me nor understand me, so you fail at being me.
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: Star12 on August 18, 2013, 01:02:43 pm
Correct! Well done!

You misspelt either?

Life is like a box of chocalates, you never know what you're gonna get!
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 18, 2013, 03:39:11 pm
You spelled "chocolates".

"Peppermint is a herb that, like organo, basil, and parsley, has flavored food for thousands of years. Besides being used in candy, it's popular in toothpaste, gum, and ice cream, and it makes a soothing tea."
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: kiaz1st on August 18, 2013, 08:41:34 pm
Misspelt flavoured?

You see now, Betty bought some butter but the butter was biter, so Betty bought some better buter to make the bitter butter better! Do you see now? Do you see the importance? The importance of this valuable lesson? I do hope you do...
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 18, 2013, 08:48:58 pm
Quote from: Kiaz on August 18, 2013, 08:41:34 pm
Misspelt flavoured?

No xD Nice try, though.

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You see now, Betty bought some butter but the butter was biter, so Betty bought some better buter to make the bitter butter better! Do you see now? Do you see the importance? The importance of this valuable lesson? I do hope you do...

"...so Betty bought some better buter to make the bitter butter better!"

You spelled "butter" wrong when Betty bough some better butter. And yes, I understand the importance of this lesson...I shall keep it in mind. x3
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: hugrf2 on August 18, 2013, 08:52:56 pm
You forgot the t in both bitter and butter once. (For Kiaz :c I spell a bit slow at the moment due to the position I'm in)

Cats are cool. They are cute, cuddly, and sometimes even fluffy. Kittens are amazingy adorable too, aren't they? Why do people dislike them sometimes?

(meep, don't answer the questions)
Title: Re: Spot the mistake!
Post by: kiaz1st on August 18, 2013, 09:28:59 pm
Misspelt amazingly?

I see a fire inside your eyes,
I see it raging with your lies.
You set the world on fire,
Now everyone knows your a lier.
So run devil run, yeah run devil run.
Run devil run, and take your lies with you.

^ My own little song xD There's more to it, but this is the start