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FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Stories => Topic started by: RainbowTea on August 29, 2013, 02:41:05 pm

Title: Skinless (a short story) (UPDATED: 9/25/2013)
Post by: RainbowTea on August 29, 2013, 02:41:05 pm
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 29, 2013, 02:44:41 pm
o.o You are a good artist & a good writer x3 Good job on it - can't wait for the next part :D
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: RainbowTea on August 29, 2013, 04:30:27 pm
Awwhh, thanks, floofy floof. c:
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: Arkayy on August 29, 2013, 05:09:01 pm
Aw cliffhanger v.v I loved it thought so far.
I Lmfaod so hard at the onion part. xD I can totally sympathize with that hatred.
You purposely making your character 'unlikable' is working reverse psychology on me. lol
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: RainbowTea on August 29, 2013, 05:50:28 pm
Thanks haha! XD Well, some people hated my character, and others liked it. I guess everyone's different. :3

I actually have most of the short story completed. I just decided to release a bit at a time for (hopefully) better criticism.
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: Arkayy on August 29, 2013, 05:59:59 pm
Lol yep. Cause most people are used to seeing that character that has a bad past, is always alone and sad, 'nice', etc etc. Idk It may be also because I just like rude characters xD
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 29, 2013, 07:24:33 pm
Quote from: Arkanis Void on August 29, 2013, 05:59:59 pm
Lol yep. Cause most people are used to seeing that character that has a bad past, is always alone and sad, 'nice', etc etc. Idk It may be also because I just like rude characters xD
I agree with you... "nice", "gentle", or "selfless" people (in stories) are too mainstream. x3
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: RainbowTea on August 29, 2013, 07:58:22 pm
I agree with you, OreoHeroz. Because of that, I'm currently working on a story where every single character is unlikable, from the mother who throws temper tantrums down to the hobo who sells potatoes for a living. I might post it, but I'm not sure. I don't want anyone stealing it o.o
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: OreoHeroz on August 29, 2013, 08:01:56 pm
I would love to see your new story, but you are correct that people might claim your story as theirs. Otherwise, I'd suggest you keep that new story to yourself (?) until you feel comfortable with sharing it.
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: Arkayy on August 29, 2013, 11:51:22 pm
Quote from: CoffeeAddict on August 29, 2013, 07:58:22 pm
I'm currently working on a story where every single character is unlikable, from the mother who throws temper tantrums down to the hobo who sells potatoes for a living.

XDD That's awesome! I wish hobos would sell me potatoes!

Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: RainbowTea on August 30, 2013, 08:58:00 pm
Le update time! <3
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: RainbowTea on September 02, 2013, 07:46:38 pm
Updated! (sorry about double post o.o)
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: OreoHeroz on September 02, 2013, 10:52:32 pm
(http://fsymbols.com/images/crying-meme.gif)
I'm Oreoz and I approve of this.

Just kidding, no. But really, I <3 it. When I first saw the updated, I couldn't stop reading - very interesting, by the way. And unique. Good job on it ;3
Title: Re: Skinless (a short story)
Post by: RainbowTea on September 03, 2013, 01:39:10 am
Quote from: OreoHeroz on September 02, 2013, 10:52:32 pm
(http://fsymbols.com/images/crying-meme.gif)
I'm Oreoz and I approve of this.

Just kidding, no. But really, I <3 it. When I first saw the updated, I couldn't stop reading - very interesting, by the way. And unique. Good job on it ;3

D'aww, thank you, floof. - tears well up in my eyes as my heart is touched by your words - Just kidding.