FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: _Rache_ on October 24, 2013, 11:41:24 pm
Title: ~*{Tranquility}*~
Post by: _Rache_ on October 24, 2013, 11:41:24 pm
A delightful breeze Fills you with ease Your optical lids shut From smelling a pleasant, naturistic musk The surrounding foliage is gratifying None-the-less satisfying Your frame lays on the dew-dampened atmosphere This is your zone, free of fear The forest is lush You haven't ever relaxed so much Your audits catch the sound of a waterfall Which lays as the center of it all The repetitious sound Pulls you down With pure tranquility And ingenuity You then fall into a deep sleep
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Post by: hugrf2 on October 25, 2013, 12:35:05 am
Very interesting to read, Neon. You did pretty good on this little poem. Good job! :o
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Post by: _Rache_ on October 25, 2013, 11:50:03 pm
Oh why thank you. X3
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Post by: crosscreature on November 10, 2013, 04:41:46 am
Awesome Poem Neon! I love your choice of words. :)
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Post by: _Rache_ on December 30, 2013, 12:44:40 am
Thank you. C:
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Post by: Vespian on December 30, 2013, 01:22:29 am
I am rather entertained by such a poetic piece of literature sir. Indeed it bestows a sense of tranquil and serenity, much more an ease to imagine. Good job.
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Post by: _Rache_ on December 31, 2013, 04:00:45 am