FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: Chunky_Squirrel on October 26, 2013, 10:22:54 pm
Title: a poem...?
Post by: Chunky_Squirrel on October 26, 2013, 10:22:54 pm
Okay so i thought of a poem....
Not to soon, Not to far, Never too late for the fall. One shall, Rise, One shall, Fall. Not today, not for all. Never there, Never here, Forever shall he live in your fear.
So, what do you think?
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Post by: Chunky_Squirrel on October 27, 2013, 09:14:04 am
bump? :(
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Post by: Chunky_Squirrel on October 27, 2013, 10:14:10 am
Another poem, it kida is from the Green Lantern movie/carton.
In brightest day, In blackest night, No evil shall escape my sight. Thoes who bare ship shaft the sight, Shall not escape the fight.
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Post by: WhiskerWatcher on October 27, 2013, 10:31:04 am
Oo, very nice poems! You definitely have skills. Good job Hackers!<3 +Floof.
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Post by: Chunky_Squirrel on October 27, 2013, 10:34:17 am
Thanks, the first poem came to find yesterday. And the second just today. :P Thanks for the floof. :)
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Post by: Chunky_Squirrel on October 27, 2013, 04:17:53 pm
Okay... another poem.... a small one....
He had fell, You have raised, Just because your right. Not for theme, Not for us.
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Post by: crosscreature on November 10, 2013, 04:45:13 am
Amazing poems Hackers! I like the choice of wording, you definitely have some skill!
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Post by: Chunky_Squirrel on November 10, 2013, 02:36:36 pm
Lol, thanks. ^.^
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Post by: Chunky_Squirrel on November 29, 2013, 10:02:47 pm
Hmmm, how about this?
In the midnights call, At the sunrise fall, The moonrise will fell.
(It takes me about 2-5-10 minutes to creat a poem.)
(-)(+)Please tell me what you think. ^.^ (+)(-)
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Post by: OreoHeroz on November 29, 2013, 10:55:22 pm
These are lovely poems Hackers!<333 amg I can't make a poem for my life ;v; i'm so jealous
Hmm... For the last one, do you mean fell or fall? (The moonrise will fall) or (The moonrise will fell)? Sorry I'm just confused.
Otherwise, the poem is amazing<3 C:
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Post by: Chunky_Squirrel on November 30, 2013, 06:48:57 am
Thanks Oreo. :) And for the moonrise, it is 'fell'. Thanks for likeing that poem, i thouth of it, yesterday at 00:25 AM Hehe.