FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Stories => Topic started by: Chunky_Squirrel on December 31, 2013, 08:04:29 pm
Title: Creepypasta by Hackers. Forever
Post by: Chunky_Squirrel on December 31, 2013, 08:04:29 pm
Okay, so i haven't really ever posted a Creppypasta storie, so it is the first time.... Anyways, i hope chu like it! O_O
WARNING: May make you scared, so please, if your too much mature, please do not read, or if your brave enough, then read.....
~:|:~Forever~:|:~
I woke up, hearing a scream outside my garden. I rumbeled out of my bed, as I walked out of my room, then down the stairs outiside my garden. I looked around, seeing nothing, except some sord of creppy looking prints.... They were no sord of an animal I knew, neither it was from the cat family, neither from dog...... I was creppied out, as I found the braveness inside myself, as I took a lightern and I walked, where the prints lead me. I walked calmly, even if I was scared inside, I showed no fear outside...... Seeing thoes prints stopted by a tree, I saw a some blood on the ground, as I looked up.... I was now torally creepied out. What was it? A creatue? Or a monster? It screamed at me, by an unknown sound. I screamed in terror, as I turned and began to run back to my home........ I ran so quickly, that I haven't even saw a brach under my feet, as I fell down, the monster/creature was near me.... I screamed in terror, as it got me.... I tride to fight back, but the thing, when I tride to hit it, biten into my arm, as it hurt very much. I screamed again, as the thing let go off me.... It just looked at me..... I was so shocked and scared that I had the braveness to stand up, and run back to my home..... But the thing was..... Where is my home? Am I lost? Am I forever trapped in this forest with this Thing? The thing ran back to me, as I ran again, the monster screamed at me, as I saw a stick, I took it, as I turned back, trying to fight the monster. The thing then spoke. "Don't worry my child, it will be over in seconds, and you shall be Trapped here 'Forever'!" I was shocked, "Am I really going to die?" "Am I?" "Someone please help me!!!" I screamed with all my throuth, as the monster, soon grabbed the stick and throwed it away. It jumped on me, as his jaws slowly opened, bitening into my flesh...... I fell down, as I was dead...... It seems.... It seems, that I would really be trapped in this forest 'Forever'.............
(So, what do you think? Am i good for the first time? Just please reply, and tell me what do you think... ;-; )
Title: Re: Creepypasta by Hackers. Forever
Post by: magicfairy on December 31, 2013, 08:21:11 pm
Nice! But just to give you a heads up Creepypastas don't usually talk to humans if their a monster-like one.
Title: Re: Creepypasta by Hackers. Forever
Post by: Chunky_Squirrel on December 31, 2013, 08:59:18 pm
Oh, now i'll know. Thank you. ^.^
Title: Re: Creepypasta by Hackers. Forever
Post by: magicfairy on December 31, 2013, 09:01:51 pm