Feral Heart
FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Stories => Topic started by: Chunky_Squirrel on February 10, 2014, 09:22:19 am
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|Welcome, so on my last thread about creepypasta I've got replies by people, so I thought I should make one since there is time for me. Hehe.
Anyways, enjoy! :3 |
"I'm trapped!"
I woke up in a strange place.
There was blood on the ground and hearts around, I was terrafied.
Where was I? Was I lost? Was I dreaming a nightmare?
I didin't knew.
I stood up, as I tried to walk, but before I could of walk away, I heard a noise.
What was it?
It was no orrdinary animal like voice, then what was it? Maybe a monster?
I flew the fear out of me and had just a bit of braveness left inside of me, so I walked to see what was it.
Seeing it looked like no animal I've ever seen it gave a creepy smile at me, I was terrafied, what was that creature?
I started to scream as I saw my friernd like there dead with her heart out.
The creature walked closer as I screamed louder as I turned to try and out run that creature, but before I could another monster just like the monster I saw was standing right near me.
I spoke up.
"I'm trapped!"
Soon the creatures jump aty me as they began attacking me.
After that I was lying there dead, blood all over me.
|Okay, so I'm not the best creepypasta writer but this is just my second creepypasta. :/ So don't hate me. Leave a feedback please!|
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I think its great! you added plenty of intensity and scariness, and that's probably the most important thing in a creepypasta story. Good job!
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Ty! ^.^
I just made it up myself.