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Title: Faulted Heir (Wolf Comic)
Post by: gnomecake on May 25, 2014, 12:24:40 am
Here is a wolf based comic I'm currently working on.
Yes, I do realize my grammar is a bit off. The night time daze gets to me.

The DA Link is here:
http://jkillaz.deviantart.com/art/Faulted-Heir-PG1-456029079?ga_submit_new=10%253A1400977384&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1&ga_recent=1 (http://jkillaz.deviantart.com/art/Faulted-Heir-PG1-456029079?ga_submit_new=10%253A1400977384&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1&ga_recent=1)

Tumblr:
foxfares.tumblr.com

Page 1:
It reads: "My father's actions outside the pack's territory was never known to me. I always had thought that it would be in my best interest to ask him, to see what my father, the alpha, did for a living, but each day as he returned from his humble journeys he only replied to my curiousity with a unsatisfied expression.

Bottom box reads: "Perhaps it's best that I don't know?"

(http://i1089.photobucket.com/albums/i358/KuroKurai/page1.png) (http://s1089.photobucket.com/user/KuroKurai/media/page1.png.html)

Page 2:
The top box reads "A raid conducted by my own pack had sent us leaderless and me- fatherless.
Weakened, it had allowed my foes to take control of the pack and its territory, making us a prisoner to our own lands while stripping us from our ranks and even our names.

(http://i1089.photobucket.com/albums/i358/KuroKurai/pg2.png) (http://s1089.photobucket.com/user/KuroKurai/media/pg2.png.html)

Page 3:
(http://i1089.photobucket.com/albums/i358/KuroKurai/page3.png) (http://s1089.photobucket.com/user/KuroKurai/media/page3.png.html)

Title: Re: Faulted Heir (Wolf Comic)
Post by: Vespian on May 25, 2014, 12:48:45 am
Colour me impressed. I like the way ye' drew each panel, Ms. I can already tell that this comic will be one worth readin'. Already I'm curious as to how the son's father was when he was still alive- why he died- and what he did that caused conspiracy to spiral within the pack. Perhaps envy or perhaps he wasn't a good alpha to his subordinates? I know not and I'll be sure to stay tuned and find out as the comic progresses.
Title: Re: Faulted Heir (Wolf Comic)
Post by: OreoHeroz on May 25, 2014, 12:53:54 am
Wow - a beautiful comic you have there, gnomecake! I really like the anatomy and the effort you put into this. Thanks for sharing your comic with us. ^^ -nuzzle-
Title: Re: Faulted Heir (Wolf Comic)
Post by: gnomecake on May 25, 2014, 01:08:34 am
Wow - a beautiful comic you have there, gnomecake! I really like the anatomy and the effort you put into this. Thanks for sharing your comic with us. ^^ -nuzzle-
Thank you very much u^_^u -nuzzles-
Title: Re: Faulted Heir (Wolf Comic)
Post by: gnomecake on May 25, 2014, 01:12:42 am
Colour me impressed. I like the way ye' drew each panel, Ms. I can already tell that this comic will be one worth readin'. Already I'm curious as to how the son's father was when he was still alive- why he died- and what he did that caused conspiracy to spiral within the pack. Perhaps envy or perhaps he wasn't a good alpha to his subordinates? I know not and I'll be sure to stay tuned and find out as the comic progresses.

I thank you greatly and yes- Many questions which will eventually be answered aye'. Glad to have such a curious reader. Many thanks to you for taking interest in it and keeping an eye out for the next ones to come. :)
Title: Re: Faulted Heir (Wolf Comic)
Post by: Bawfle on June 12, 2014, 04:18:39 pm
You have a lovely comic goin' on there ^^ Can't wait to see it become more developed! :)