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FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: Seijun on June 18, 2014, 12:24:21 am

Title: Just a Poem
Post by: Seijun on June 18, 2014, 12:24:21 am

~A Home~


A home isn't a roof over your head
Or a mansion that shines white
A home is a place you treasure most
And stay through out the night

One day you will understand
That everyone isn't always fun
There are many people out there
And with a home, they might have none.

Be grateful for the home you have
With cookies on the table
Laughing siblings all smiling bright
But home isn't always a fable

But even the "homeless" though I prefer "houseless"
Have homes they hold so dear.
For if you find a group in one of those shelters
And ask where their home is, they will say, "Right here."

Not many think of homes like this
However, I thought hard.
A home is mistaken for a house many times.
But really, its where your friends and family never fall apart.

Title: Re: Just a Poem
Post by: AlphaEclipse on June 18, 2014, 01:32:59 am

One if the nicest poems I have ever read- literally. I really liked this poem, and I would love to read more! :)

Title: Re: Just a Poem
Post by: Seijun on June 18, 2014, 01:34:29 am

Quote from: AlphaEclipse on June 18, 2014, 01:32:59 am

One if the nicest poems I have ever read- literally. I really liked this poem, and I would love to read more! :)

Thank you! I have another poem called "Moderation" if you would like to read that!

Title: Re: Just a Poem
Post by: unnbrellas on June 18, 2014, 01:36:36 am

<3 This is a very pretty and touching poem. My favorite verus would have to be the 4th, I especially love the line "But even the homeless, though I prefer houseless". Overall, great job!

Title: Re: Just a Poem
Post by: Seijun on June 18, 2014, 01:38:00 am

Quote from: MochaCocoa on June 18, 2014, 01:36:36 am

<3 This is a very pretty and touching poem. My favorite verus would have to be the 4th, I especially love the line "But even the homeless, though I prefer houseless". Overall, great job!

Thank you again! I appreciate that people like it! Thank you!  :D