Feral Heart

FeralHeart Creations => Stories => FeralHeart Media => Poems => Topic started by: PotatoPotPie on June 18, 2014, 04:11:11 am

Title: Feral
Post by: PotatoPotPie on June 18, 2014, 04:11:11 am

Run. Run. Run.

Faster. Faster.

Let the instinct take over.

Become who you were always supposed.

Shred the world with your claws.

Let the blood flow.

Lick it up.

Let the insanity in.

Become feral.

Title: Re: Feral
Post by: wolfdog01 on June 18, 2014, 06:36:53 am

Ohhhhh I love the freeverse thing you got goin' on ^^
This is a pretty good little poem you have going here! I like it!

Title: Re: Feral
Post by: PotatoPotPie on June 18, 2014, 02:17:13 pm

Quote from: ~Thyme~ on June 18, 2014, 06:36:53 am

Ohhhhh I love the freeverse thing you got goin' on ^^
This is a pretty good little poem you have going here! I like it!

<3 Considering I wrote this late at night, I was surprised how well it came out.

Title: Re: Feral
Post by: shayy on June 18, 2014, 02:21:26 pm

Beautiful, you really have a way with words

Title: Re: Feral
Post by: PotatoPotPie on June 18, 2014, 02:25:33 pm

Quote from: S-H-A-Y on June 18, 2014, 02:21:26 pm

Beautiful, you really have a way with words

I don't know if you can tell I have a way with words in this particular poem but thanks :3

Title: Re: Feral
Post by: unnbrellas on June 18, 2014, 02:28:39 pm

Love it! :)

Title: Re: Feral
Post by: PotatoPotPie on June 18, 2014, 02:31:26 pm

Quote from: MochaCocoa on June 18, 2014, 02:28:39 pm

Love it! :)

Thanks (: