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FeralHeart Creations => FeralHeart Media => Stories => Topic started by: Greenfire on January 21, 2016, 08:19:49 pm

Title: I need someone to critique this for me, please!
Post by: Greenfire on January 21, 2016, 08:19:49 pm

Title: Re: I need someone to critique this for me, please!
Post by: G4RG0YLE on January 21, 2016, 10:19:12 pm

The words you used are absolutely gorgeous and intriguing!
The instant imagery is fantastic and effective, and the way you've so effortlessly described a vision and shadows and reflections just makes me want to read more. Honestly, keep up the good work because I'd love to see what else you have in store for us!